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by hannafate

Comment:
I like the photo...sneaky way to advertise your business! The background towards the right side could be covered by more buttons.

Right Out of the Box
by aguinn

Comment:
I like the idea behind this photo! I like the fork where it is...I think that it gives the onlooker the apeal that YOU are eating the brownie mix out of the package! Around the edges, the photo seems to be blurred. The photo could be more clear and concise!

The Yellow Pages. Let your fingers do the walking.
by zeke123ca

Comment:
In this photo, the background takes away from the photo a lot! The highlight from the light source in the upper left also slightly takes away from the photo! Great subject matter though, good thinking!

The best way to somke em
by Rasai

Comment:
This is a really cool photo. I like the moral behind the photo. You got a really nice shot of the fire, and I like how you made the cigarettes your main image!

One thing, the top half of the picture is too dark, it makes too much of a contrast between the bright flame and itself. You might want to enhance that part of the photo. Other than that...great job!

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Fissures
by Imagineer

Comment:
In this photo, you did an awesome job showing perspective! I think that the glare from the images takes away from the photo a bit, but not too much!

Lighting is done very well in this photo. I think possibly you might want a different stand point to make the photo more symmetrical! I like how you open the photo with this very orange-red runway. It adds a lot of character to the photo! Great Job with this piece!

geshlechtmann27
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Mysterious lonleyness
by asij

Comment:
This photo is great! The texture of this photo is magnificent. The front cliff jumps out at you! The back mountain/hill and house seem very unreal.

Towards the back of the photo it begins to get very blurry. This may be a contributing factor in the unreal-ness! I really enjoy the contrasting greens and blacks. Overall good photo.

geschlechtmann27

Untitled
by aperture_disaster

Comment:
This is a nice perspective photo. I like how you can look down the "road" and it seems to disapear. This is a good black and white photo.

It seems as if you took something out in the background. If you are going to take something out, try to blend what is left more! Other than that nice black and white composition.

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HERE'S LOOKING AT YOU
by joleneyng1

Comment:
This is a good example of Point of View. The photo is a little unclear, but that is probable in water.

It seems as if on the lower right hand side of the photo there was a glare, in your upcoming photos try to get rid of this. Also towards the edges of the photo it is very dark...this takes away from the photo. Nice job other than that!

geschlechtmann27
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The Art of the Romans
by nsoroma79

Comment:
This is a good example of lighting. I am glad that you used the clone tool to cut the ceiling distractions. It looks much smoother and is easy on the eyes. Some of the photos you can tell that they took something out, but on this one I cannot tell! Great Job.

The blue background takes away from the photo. The eye wants to go towards the blue because it is the only color. Other than that, good job!

geschlechtmann27
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Romanic Architecture of the 11th Century
by Harz_Joerg

Comment:
Great example of architecture! Overall this photo is great. The repetition of column textures. The texture of the snow! Overall texture.

The lighting of this photo is a little dull. Your perspective is great. The slant of the photo gives the eye somewhere to move. Movement is great in a still life photo! If I were the editor of National Geographic your picture would definately go in this issue! Great Job.

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