Brothers in a Box
by reificationComment by alfresco:
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Please bear in mind that I'm not a trained professional..
Interesting composition. The boys are nicely placed on the frame. I'm left wondering "Why are they in a box"?
The focus seems a little soft, it might have more impact had the focus been crisper. B/W works for this image, the tonal range is very good. The lighting seems to have created an odd depth (or lack thereof) to the boys. Overall the image is flat.
Cute little fellas they are. The more I look at this photo the more I like it, however there isn't, for me, an instant aesthetic appeal.
Relationship to Challenge
There are many aspects to "Perspective" here, the vanishing lines of the box being the most obvious. It does meet the challenge in that aspect.
The interest for me in this photo is "Why are they in a box?" After that there really isn't much to keep me drawn in.
I look forward to seeing your future entries!