Blue Angelsby
blancericComment: *A Critique Club Comment*
Aloha Eric
Please keep in mind I'm not a trained professional ...
Composition
I like the formation, too bad the trailing jet isn't a tad higher but you have very little control over that. I agree with the others who've stated more pixels are needed on the right, I think less magnification and a near-pano crop may have been the ticket for this orientation of the jets.
Technical / Post Processing
My feeling is that you pushed the limits of your lens and did what you could PP to bring out the planes. I may be wrong, only you know, but that is the feeling I get looking at the photo. The overall color is off (as others have mentioned). Some selective color editing would really make this photo pop - give the sky a bluer blue, the yellows less orange. The halo is distracting, cloning that out would have helped.
Aesthetics
I do not find the photo aesthetically displeasing, however I find it lacks a pop.
Relevance to Challenge
I find the Blue Angels to be relevant to the challenge. They might have been a much better fit and more widely accepted in the recent "Pride" challenge.
Overall
Overall I think this is a nice photo that could have scored much higher had you employed a different crop and did some selective color editing.
I always enjoy seeing your photos and you have quite the excellent portfolio, I look forward to seeing your future work.
-jp