Going nowhere fast
by boyte1

Comment:
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Composition (content)
Original composition, I like the way treadmill guides you trough the frame and how the theadmills beyond that explain what we are looking at, what setting we are in. They also provide good depth and form a second diagonal trough the frame that leads the eye.
Nice motion blur.
Too bad that the power plug is plugged in and that the black of it contrasts so much with the wall, because it is a little distracting.

Background
The background is to busy, not that you have much control over it. The situation around the right leg isn't nice. A mirror on one side, more mirrors against the wall on the other side, with a lot of stuff. Would have been nicer without the mirrors.

Camera Work (Technical)
Good choice of shutterspeed, exposure is good, focus and depth is good. The only minus is the noise here and there (depends on what you like). Sharpness is ok, but tilts to the hard side with some lines, but overall ok.

Digital Processing (technical)
I tried a bit of unsharp mask in Photoshop and it depends on what you like, it could add something (right shoe and sock). On the other hand it oversharpened the diagonals.
Not much else to mention.
B&W is a good choice in my opinion.

My opinion
Good.

Message edited by author 2002-12-16 16:02:27.

Tick Tock
by jab119

Comment:
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Composition (content)
The clock is cut off at the bottom and a lot of open space is left at the top. It is something I forget to pay attention to when framing. Busy with the exposure, avoiding camera shake and when I review it on the pc "Damn, the ship's mast runs out of the frame"..... See wingy's comment on what to do when that happens.
The black vs white is indeed very nice.
The lighting is uneven, with the main light source from the left. You could try to position a reflecting paper (A4/A5 printing paper) at the right. But that also adds a bit more light, on the other hand you have plenty of room to use a smaller aperture (higher F). Another benefit of reflecting light at the right is that it will fill the shadow in the clock at the left to some degree.
The clock seems to tick uneven, it remains in the same position for longer every two seconds it seems. :-) Well captured motion!

Background
Good contrast with the clock, all focus is on the clock and the motion.

Camera Work (Technical)
Excellent exposure, camera sharpness ok, dof not an issue.

Digital Processing (technical)
Could have benefited from a bit unsharp mask (tried that myself). Don't forget to save your file at the highest possible quality level, it is only 50k of the 150k allowed. That might have caused the unsharp feel of "quartz", "china" and the numbers at the left side.

My opinion
Nice, but not outstanding.
(edit) And before I forget to mention it, don't pay attention to comments like "we have seen that before". When I would base my votes on that, almost everyone gets a 1.

Message edited by author 2002-12-16 14:31:20.

Liquid stick shift
by kosmikkreeper

Comment:
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Composition (content)
Composition is good. Classic subject placement by the rule of thirds, the rest of the frame being filled by the riples. The color is great, the differences in blue intensity adding to the shape of the waves. The use of the flash led to one minor negative aspect: a few blown out patches and points that are a little bit distracting. If you haven't try to bounce the flash on a reflecting surface (white ceiling or white paper) or put a diffuser in front of the flash to get rit of those spots.

Background
Nice & soft. :-) Is it water are we looking at Neptune, nice effect. Not nice is the high amount of what appears to be noise in everything but the main subject. Could be the result of using ISO200, but for ISO200 there is a bit too much in my opinion. Have you tried to use one stop wider aperture in combination with ISO100? Should take the noise out.

Camera Work (Technical)
See above.
Exposure is good, focus is good, depth of field is good (but you might want to try the wider aperture / slower ISO trick, don't know if that will affect the DOF too much). Sharpness is OK.

Digital Processing (technical)
Nothing to mention here.

My opinion
Frozen water drop effects are great subjects, good choice and well captured. Nice color.
I don't like the grainy look and the flash blow outs & reflections are a bit distracting.

lust for sale
by shutterfly

Comment:
I ran into this pic again and I remembered it from the challenge. Yes, sex sells, but besides that it is also a great pic. I like the exposure, your friend Emma really stands out. The hair, skin tones, the blue of the lingerie and subject shadow detail are captured.
The wall on the upper right balances very well with the hair, while the edge between the wall and the bedd adds perspective. Because the right side is blown out exposurewise all focus is on Emma. The way the money is distributed over the bed (could use the wrong word there, English is not my first language) adds depth.
Her position is very good. Original and giving a good profile, definitely creating a feeling of lust (altough I will not pay). :-)
To come back on the exposure, I think you did a good job. The main subject is really good, the overexposure on the right and around the money is a justified tradeoff.

Boy's Toys
by Azrifel

Comment:
no text anymore

Message edited by author 2006-06-03 20:08:11.

A Splash of Color
by Rackat

Comment:
Nice use of color to make this an original shot.

Old Blue-Eye
by Isaac

Comment:
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Composition (content)
The composition is basically OK. It is just that the subject itself isn't very appealing. It might have been prettier to make a portrait of both eyes.

Background
There is no background.

Camera Work (Technical)
The flash was not a good decision. First of all, this picture didn't need the F8.6 aperture, you could try to open it up to F2 / F2.8 . It could of course be that you have no control over it.
It creates a nasty glare from the skin, not nice at all. Try to get more natural light or let someone hold a table lamp ore something. Don't use a flashlight/torch as that light is often to bright, you want the diffuse light from a "low" Watt bulb or the tinted glass of a bulb. What works is a flashlight diffused by a piece of transparent (the kind you can use to draw the stuff that is on the paper below it) paper. You could even put that between the subject and your flash. That too diffuses light. It would have made the skin much more pleasing, now it looks a bit sweaty.
The skin that isn't affected by the flash looks very natural and the hair has detail, which is nice.

Focus and sharpness are good.

Digital Processing (technical)
Nothing to mention.

My opinion
Interesting choice of subject, but I don't like the picture because of the sweaty look created by the flash.

Inri
by juhaseila

Comment:
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Composition (content)
This is a subject that deserves to be centered and has symmetry as a strong point. Unfortunately it is not, but when I look at it a bit better I guess it would have meant that the Jezus in the window in the back would have been hidden from view by the Jezus in the foreground so I understand the decision to do it as it is. Now that I think a bit more about it, centering would also have made the cross obstruct the view on a part of the roof construction. I do think that it could have been cropped/framed a bit better to get a symmetry between the two upper corners. Nonetheless it is a good composition.

Background
Great background, all kind of textures in the same historic style. A historic background for a historic figure. And it is beautifully lit as well, kudos to the people who run the place.
It is busy, but it relates to the subject and is therefore not distracting. I wan't to look at both and it isn't bothering me.
In a way it shows the lifecycle of Jezus, because the construction of the roof depicts the bright Star that attracted the wise men from the east at his birth, while the cross shows his terrible end.
It also gives great depth to the place.

Camera Work (Technical)
Very good exposure and I can see from the technical details that it was pretty hard. F2.8, 1/40s and ISO800, I gues it was hand held?
For F2.8 the depth of field is enormous.
Good focus, very sharp.

Digital Processing (technical)
I have said all there is to be said, nothing to add.

My opinion
I really liked this shot and I am surprised that it is way down here in the votes. In my opinion the picture meets the challenge very well, because it has some blue in it (duh), but also because Jezus / church can be a big support for people who feel blue.
It is original and looks very good. Added to my favourites.

JADE
by tito79_98

Comment:
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Composition (content)
The composition is a bit centered in the middle, not pleasing to the eye. I don't say that you should go with the rule of thirds, but some creativity with the stream of water would have been nice.
There are also some distractions, like the blown out spot in the upper left corner, the wiggly blue bits in the upper right and some excessive reflections from the ripples.
I like how the water behaves (shutterspeed) and one thing that I find stunning is that there seems to be a part of a face in the stream of water, just above the center.

Background
The blue/green/jade background has some damage that distracts a little bit. Again, try to get rid of that blown out spot in the corner.

Camera Work (Technical)
Good DOF, focus ok, sharpness ok, good choice of shutter. Might want to try a polarizing filter for the reflections. Exposure is good except for the bright spot (it is really that annoying).

Digital Processing (technical)
Looks ok. Remember that the limit for submissions is 150kb, your picture is 100kb. A higher jpeg quality means better detail sharpness and better color rendition.

My opinion
As it is, a bit boring. The face/eye in the stream of water is interesting.

The Drake
by pstuhr

Comment:
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*Composition (content)*
I loved this shot right away, as I am a sucker for urban landscapes and long exposure roads with car lights. The challenge is easily met, that is not an issue. The rules were broad and the sky is blue, but more important is the nice blue reflection on the snow on the edged of the roof and the ground.
As I already said in my previous comment: Nice perspective.
Altought the title say's that The Drake is the main subject, the eye is drawn to the streets with traffic. I see an urban artery, a city alive.
You could say that the building at the right spoils it a bit and that it should be cropped out, but on the other hand it gives a glimp of live behind those windows. It still has some detail because of a good exposure.
The only dissapointment is that the red lights in the right lanes are overblown by all the white light from the uncoming traffic, but there is not much you can do about that.

*Background*
Nice sky with some clouds, horizon is visible because of the lights.

*Camera Work (Technical)*
Horizon looks straight enough. The building on the right distorts somwhat, I guess because of a wideangle lens setting, not much can be done about that from this position I think.
Exposure is good, there is detail in the shadow of the building at the right, the snow isn't blown out. Good depth of field. Sharpness ok.

*Digital Processing (technical)*
Looks good. I noticed that the file is only 100k. Try to save it at a higher quality, to keep sharpness and detail up. The limit is 150kb. It doesn't hurt the picture here, but keep it in mind.

*My opinion*
I like it!
And I really need to go to Chicago one day. I studied Chicago's urban history for America Studies at the Amsterdam University, there is so much architecture to photograph there. I'll add it to my favorites. ;-)