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| 03/09/2005 03:24:02 PM |
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| 03/09/2005 03:23:18 PM |
Persistant Obesessionby AJFIComment: This is very imaginative; however, I don't find the bed spreadvery appealing as a backdrop. You may have had more success with a regular sheet rather than a quilted comforter. The sheet would have had more interesting lines adn shadows. Also, this image may have done better if the composition used more of the rule of thrids. |
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| 03/09/2005 03:19:26 PM |
Snow Tanningby mrwaffles989Comment: This is very imaginative. however, I would suggest taking images like this when teh sun is lower so you don't get as many shadows. |
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| 03/09/2005 03:18:58 PM |
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| 03/09/2005 03:18:14 PM |
Fishby palmfrodurComment: I realize you probably receive a lot of comments already that this isn't exactly surreal. However, I would like to offer some construtive criticism of the photograph - it's a really nice portrait - your daughter has lovely expression and you caught her in a great moment. I think though, that in dark situations like this you should steady your camera on a tripod or on something sturdy if you cannot afford a tripod. Low lighting like this can result in a bit of camera shake, even on your end that will blur your image slightly. It looks like the focus isn't as sharp because o fthis. Your composition is quite good, but I would suggest trying to look at your negative space a little bit more. You could have made the main subjects pop right off the page in 3D with a little bit of shallow DoF - the negative space doesn't really do anything for the image. With a shallow DoF, you would only see the shape of the negative space and you wouldn't be distracted by tree branches. Good luck in this. |
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