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| 09/16/2009 10:32:40 PM |
Goldenby gg3rdComment: You have a potentially interesting subject, but your angled point of view and the awkward crop really prevent this one from the hopes of a strong score. I don't know how I would try to shoot this entire piece, thus I would probably focus on detail work. I know that isn't helpful being that he challenge was nine, but without just shooting this one straight on and centered I fear is would just look awkward. 4. |
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| 09/16/2009 10:29:40 PM |
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| 09/16/2009 10:24:59 PM |
Nine Petals Leftby peterComment: I am about 30% of the way through voting on the images for this challenge, but I am already sure that this one will ribbon. I imagine that you are sitting on a score somewhere in the 6.75 range right now. Great colors and wonderful creativity. I am seeing some pixelation with some of the petals, but I don't think that it will be enough to significantly detract from your score. From me, a 7. |
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| 09/16/2009 10:19:53 PM |
Rulerby Lima_to_LAComment: Nice macro, but your primary focus is off. Just glancing at the image and assuming a challenge topic, I would go with fractions before I would guess nine. Sure, the nine is prominent is size, but the soft focus leads the eye away from your intended topic and locks it onto the 7/8. I do like the composition, but the nine absolutely needs to be the primary focal point of the image. 5. |
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| 09/16/2009 10:17:30 PM |
9 Up 1 Downby eaglebeckComment: You tackled a pretty difficult subject here. Shooting distant whites on several different focal planes along with harsh, uneven lighting is difficult to pull off with any appeal. As it is shot, you lose too much of your intended subjects to poor lighting, fading focus, and simple obstructions. You did fit well into the challenge topic, but this one needs more attention to execution from the composition and shutter release. 3. |
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| 09/16/2009 10:11:40 PM |
Clockwork 9:09 9/09/09by aprudhommeComment: I like your choice of subject here. I have seen several mundane clock photos in this challenge thus far, but yours has a much higher level of interest and creativity. I would, however, like to see this with a better composition. As it is, if feels too centered and unbalance. Odd, I know, but that's what my mind is telling me. I think shooting with about a 20 degree counter-clockwise composition would have given this one a better flow. The imbalance between the chopped face cover on the left and the dead space on the bottom right corner is a bit too much for my eye to overcome. Nicely creative, but I'd like to see a bit better execution. This one scores a 6 from my vote. |
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| 09/16/2009 10:05:23 PM |
It's 9 everywhereby mqnaufalComment: This is a very, very common subject and technique on DPC that is often well-executed. This one is lacking in the fact that the sixes are much more prominent in the image than your nines, even though the wonderfully, crisp focus is right where it needs to be. I think a tighter crop would have better accentuated the proper portion of the image. As it is, the background competes far too much with the subject. For the crisp focus and excellent detail, I score this one a 5. Even though this has become one of my least favorite techniques on this site, with a tighter crop I would have scored this one stronger. |
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| 09/16/2009 09:58:10 PM |
Starship 200oby riversongComment: I am guessing that I am not the first voter to struggle to find the relation of this image to the Nine challenge. I don't even know what else to comment. 1. |
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| 09/16/2009 09:56:35 PM |
Lemon-Rose '9'... !?by acg83Comment: The selective focus works well in your image, but the 9 is very difficult to see right away. I like the muted tones you captured, but the narrow, rectangle crop gives this one an awkward appearance. In addition, it is cropped too much in from the right hand side, nearly touching the lemon. A neat still life, but this one is a definite challenge shoehorn. Even still, with a better crop I wouldn't have hesitated to give it a strong score. As it is, I score it a 4. |
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| 09/16/2009 09:41:19 PM |
One Of These Is Not Like The Othersby vladoComment: Selective desaturation can be a very useful tool when executed effectively. Here, the red of the matchbox seems distorted and out of place. I to like the idea, but, in my opinion, all nine matchsticks should also be in crisp focus. With the challenge subject being nine, I'd like to see the nine clearly distinguished in the image. Here, one item is distinguished, but even that one has some detraction with the red in the matchbox. Definitely some potential here, but this one needs much better execution to grow your score. 3. |
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