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Old 'N' Broken Down
08/07/2005 02:37:53 AM
Old 'N' Broken Down
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Comment by ShutterPug:
** Greetings from the Critique Club **

Cropped a bit tightly, and a little too dark in my opinion. I like the way the light was casted upon the ladder, but the sun spots are a bit much.

- Linda
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Old 'N' Broken Down
07/31/2005 11:52:04 PM
Old 'N' Broken Down
by SeaSail

Comment by Jeileen:
Difficult to tell what this is . . . shadows are also distracting. 3
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Old 'N' Broken Down
07/30/2005 08:45:37 AM
Old 'N' Broken Down
by SeaSail

Comment by jrtodd:
Subject Impact: Doesn't really grab me
Meets Challenge: Meets Challenge
Technical: OK
Composition: Good
Creativity: OK

Score: 4
Independence from Routine
07/29/2005 12:39:00 AM
Independence from Routine
by SeaSail

Comment by ShutterPug:
** Greetings form the Critique Club **

Composition is strong here, a great use of negative space. The color cast however is too yellow throughout. I am assuming you were going for the warm tone feeling, but you are lacking the warmth of reds. The model looks to possibly have red hair - would have loved to see the color come through more. The facial expression does not say independence to me, or freedom from routine. It looks too posed - like a waxed museum piece. The eyes are fixed into a stare. Would have been more convincing if the model was in a more relaxed, care free pose.

- Linda
Old 'N' Broken Down
07/26/2005 02:38:01 AM
Old 'N' Broken Down
by SeaSail

Comment by jseyerle:
Lighting is bad. Takes away from the shot
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Old 'N' Broken Down
07/25/2005 05:09:34 PM
Old 'N' Broken Down
by SeaSail

Comment by dahkota:
It took me a few minutes to figure out what this was. The lighting does not help at all. The crop is awkward, leaving me bits and pieces but I can't tell what is the focus. This could be reshot, maybe on an overcast day to get rid of the hots spots, maybe with the photographer on a more even plane with the ladder. This would give a clearer view of what you as the photographer saw. 3
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Old 'N' Broken Down
07/25/2005 01:42:31 AM
Old 'N' Broken Down
by SeaSail

Comment by kmbr2001:
what a masterpiece! 10
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Independence from Routine
07/21/2005 01:58:41 AM
Independence from Routine
by SeaSail

Comment by kmbr2001:
amazing photo!!! Great model, great composition, great color, great photo, great great great great!!!!
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Independence from Routine
07/18/2005 07:18:03 PM
Independence from Routine
by SeaSail

Comment by lissylou:
I don't understand the connection to the title
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Independence from Routine
07/17/2005 12:00:26 PM
Independence from Routine
by SeaSail

Comment by Jutilda:
I wish this were more rich and not so yellow. Maybe bring up the gray tones a bit more. The light on her cheekbones is nice and the use of negative space works for me. Maybe crop out part of the left side just a smidge.
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