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Wendy at the park
12/09/2008 11:38:02 PM
Wendy at the park
by dRock

Comment by ericwoo:
Hey there from the Critique Club

Camera Work/Technical: Well, after 3 and a half years of waiting, this is a pretty nice entry. It looks like your focal point is nicely placed, and I like your depth of field use. i can see just enough detail in the background ot know what I am looking at, yet the blurring prevents it from competing with the subject for my eye's attention.

Lighting: I do like the start that you had with your lighting here. However, I thin that you could have added just a bit more fill light to her right side as well as closed that aperture just a bit to keep the hot spot off of her hair. The light falls off just a little too much leaving her right hand a bit too dark for my taste.

Composition/Content: I really like how this image has been composed. The crop keeps enough background, yet really serves to accentuate the subject.

My Opinion: I like it, but I'd like some slight lighting changes. Even still, I feel that 5.4 was a little low for this one.

Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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Wendy at the park
12/01/2008 10:27:44 AM
Wendy at the park
by dRock

Comment by aKiwi:
Beautiful portrait.
If i was to be really critical I would say the hair is a little blown out.
Love the composition. I would have croped a little lower so as not to crop at the knee.
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Wendy at the park
11/30/2008 11:45:06 PM
Wendy at the park
by dRock

Comment by outland:
This is very nice, indeed. Perfect exposure, framing, setting, expression. 10
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Wendy at the park
11/29/2008 04:02:55 PM
Wendy at the park
by dRock

Comment by jomari:
Lovely picture.
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Wendy at the park
11/28/2008 07:29:55 PM
Wendy at the park
by dRock

Comment by sonyalphausr:
if this is moonlit, great positioning
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Wendy at the park
11/28/2008 12:13:00 AM
Wendy at the park
by dRock

Comment by Lonni:
You've lit this wonderfully. I'd love to see your setup one the challenge is over.
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Wendy at the park
11/26/2008 04:20:54 PM
Wendy at the park
by dRock

Comment by KarenNfld:
Beautiful night image, great lighting.
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Wendy at the park
11/26/2008 11:38:50 AM
Wendy at the park
by dRock

Comment by Daybis:
Nice use of fill.
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