Wendy at the park
by dRockComment by ericwoo: Hey there from the Critique Club
Well, after 3 and a half years of waiting, this is a pretty nice entry. It looks like your focal point is nicely placed, and I like your depth of field use. i can see just enough detail in the background ot know what I am looking at, yet the blurring prevents it from competing with the subject for my eye's attention.
I do like the start that you had with your lighting here. However, I thin that you could have added just a bit more fill light to her right side as well as closed that aperture just a bit to keep the hot spot off of her hair. The light falls off just a little too much leaving her right hand a bit too dark for my taste.
I really like how this image has been composed. The crop keeps enough background, yet really serves to accentuate the subject.
I like it, but I'd like some slight lighting changes. Even still, I feel that 5.4 was a little low for this one.
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,