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Rural Citrus
02/25/2006 05:29:36 PM
Rural Citrus
by kama0529

Comment by arnit:
Critique Club:
The idea is good. The green vs yellow looks good. There are a few things that could have done better. The lighting is a bit harsh. Softer lighting would have worked better because the subject is quite soft. I think the background is a bit distracting. I think if the background were more out of focus it would improve the picture. And the focus seems to be a bit off. The autofocus probably caught the leave instead of the fruit. Perhaps a close crop would have made it better as well. Maby just 2-3 fruits in the picture.

Keep up the good work. Love your "Le temps se tient toujours (Time stands still)" shot in the Romance competition.
Architecturally abstract
02/19/2006 02:31:11 PM
Architecturally abstract
by kama0529

Comment by HBunch:
*Critique Club*

Definately abstract. I think I could have guessed what this was, especially with the title, so maybe a little lose on the challenge, but still abstract non the less.
The color is nice. The photo is just not holding my attention much. I think that the area in the lower right appears to be the main focal point, since that's where all the lines are drawing my attention to, and that area lacks visual appeal. It's hard to critique the technical aspects of an abstract, but your focus looks good. I wonder what this would be like with a soft focus? Maybe give it a more abstract feel or add something of interest?
Overall, I think it's very representative of an abstract, but lacking something that really holds my interest.
~Heather~
Rural Citrus
02/18/2006 09:21:22 PM
Rural Citrus
by kama0529

Comment by Tammer:
Your flash appears a bit harsh. A different lighting source might produce a better result.
Rural Citrus
02/17/2006 11:21:45 PM
Rural Citrus
by kama0529

Comment by KiwiShotz:
The problem you have with this is that the auto-focus has picked the leaves instead of the fruit. In voting, that is going to cost you a couple of voting points. Then it is also likely that since these could be in a city garden or a rooftop apartment garden, you're going to loose points for the image not being able to prove that it's in th country. Then there will also be those who don't feel that fruit show 'life'. So it's an uphill battle and this is a tough school.
Rural Citrus
02/15/2006 05:03:50 AM
Rural Citrus
by kama0529

Comment by KHolt:
As with the other photo of lemons, it really doesn't give a feeling of country life even if it is in the country. In terms of the photograph the harsh shadow cast is a bit off putting
Rural Citrus
02/14/2006 01:05:10 PM
Rural Citrus
by kama0529

Comment by Younger:
This does not depict country life to me. I live in the city and I have a lemon tree too. This picture could have been taken in my back yard.
Also flash lighting is too harsh. Try using a tripod and making a longer exposure to get natural light. Keep trying.
Rural Citrus
02/13/2006 04:18:16 PM
Rural Citrus
by kama0529

Comment by kari1:
Interesting shot, but the lemons don't seem as sharp as they could be.
Rural Citrus
02/13/2006 10:06:58 AM
Rural Citrus
by kama0529

Comment by jfwolpert:
the flash looks un-natural
Architecturally abstract
02/12/2006 06:46:23 PM
Architecturally abstract
by kama0529

Comment by liebe:
this gives the illusian of a spider's web dripping with dew. I like it.
Photographer found comment helpful.
Architecturally abstract
02/09/2006 08:00:52 PM
Architecturally abstract
by kama0529

Comment by KiwiShotz:
I love the geometry of geodesic domes, nice capture.
Photographer found comment helpful.
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