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do you feel dizzy?
12/27/2005 04:04:21 PM
do you feel dizzy?
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Comment by britteyboo:
Good interpretation of challenge topic
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do you feel dizzy?
12/26/2005 01:33:23 PM
do you feel dizzy?
by stumpy

Comment by Elmakias:
The colors are great and i feel very dizzy when i look at this
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curves of early morning light
12/15/2005 09:58:38 AM
curves of early morning light
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Comment by crazyhazel_13:
VERRY NICE PICTURE WOULD OF BEEN A 10 IF THE TATOO WASNT THERE BUT ITS GREAT YOU SHOULD OF CAME IN 6TH PL
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curves of early morning light
12/13/2005 10:32:41 PM
curves of early morning light
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Comment by judy c:
nice picture
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curves of early morning light
12/13/2005 10:17:04 PM
curves of early morning light
by stumpy

Comment by davidbedard:
This could have been good. Beautiful curve, nicely framed, but the top half of the photo has no good relation to the lower half. The bright blown out vertical framed by near balck distracts from your subject. The off horizontal line up the center is not pleasing at all. Then there's the little corner of pillow to the left that just makes your eye go... why?
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curves of early morning light
12/13/2005 03:15:36 PM
curves of early morning light
by stumpy

Comment by Registered:
Now this...THIS IS ART.
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curves of early morning light
12/11/2005 08:06:01 AM
curves of early morning light
by stumpy

Comment by jpdeloof:
I would have preferred to see the tatoo that two beautiful buttocks. I also find that the person is proposed too much plane what leaves a quite empty background, hardly open curtains. There is a beautiful imbalance.
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industrial power 260kv
12/11/2005 01:58:11 AM
industrial power 260kv
by stumpy

Comment by KiwiShotz:
::: Critique Club :::
Hi Steve and welcome to the DPC Challenge. Congratulations on a good start by scoring 58% in your first try.!

Thanks for putting in your photographer's comments, they help enormously in doing a critique. The Photograph information really helps a critique too. You can get it from your images by right-clicking it in Win Explorer -> Properties -> summary -> Advanced. That will give you the Aperture, ISO and shutter details plus a whole lot more. Be aware that if you edit in any way the file that comes out of your camera and save it to the same name, all that (EXIF) data will be lost. Always do a Save As for the first step.

First Impression - the most important one:
I'm a sucker for snow and winter, it's where my soul is, so my first impression is always a warm one:) Photographically, this really gets a comfortable reaction from the eye and as you see, has attracted votes accordingly.

Composition:
The composition in this image is that of a trained photographer or a very good photographer's natural eye. Whether by accident or design, you have used perfectly the two main basic rules of composition in this image.

The Rule of Thirds: the foremost pylon is on a vertical thirds line. It is comfortable to the eye there and strikes a chord with the viewer. Rule of Leading Lines: you've got the pylons leading the eye into the picture as they have the perspective lines to follow. Believe it or not, this gives the image 3D depth rather than a flat feel. Research proves these 'rules' to be effective pleasing elements to viewers of paintings or photographs.

There is a third 'rule'. Research again tells us that the eye naturally enters an image bottom left and goes out top right, failing that, at least left to right. That could apply in two ways to this image. You could say it already does that by the eye following the line from the small pylon to the large. Or, you could consider the large pylon as the starting point from which the eye travels along the perspective to the smaller one. To test the latter case, I would try a mirror of the image and see which works better.

Remember though that rules are for the Adherence of Fools and the Guidance of Wise Men.

Subject:
This is a simple mood and geometric image that meets the challenge well. Less is often more and this image has that. It's not overstated but a simple study of the one thing that no industry can do without - energy. I also applaud your lateral view of the obvious response to this challenge ... factories and smoke with water/clouds/reflections etc. It is "different" that has the most chance of cutting through all of the rest.

Technical (Colour and light):
This is the weakest aspect of the image. That it scored so well, yes it did, with this flat grey slightly overexposed look is a testament to how well you got those other elements so right.

In a way, the misty look is appealing. It gives the image mood and isolation, both are useful emotively on voters. You could preserve that feel whilst making the contrast a little more pronounced and giving the image some oomph. If you have editing software that does adjustment layers, you can make non-destructive (original pixels untouched) adjustments to things like brightness and contrast. If not, most graphics programs will let you adjust brightness, contrast or gamma.

Take this image and try some differing settings, they can transform your ex-camera original in ways you couldn't imagine. Don't push it though, they're a savvy lot here and they can tell when you're desperate and trying too hard :)

Summary:
This is a damned fine start, you have the eye. See you again we hope :)

Brett
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curves of early morning light
12/09/2005 10:24:47 PM
curves of early morning light
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Comment by samanwar:
Interesting shot ..
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curves of early morning light
12/09/2005 12:17:24 AM
curves of early morning light
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Comment by SarahCJ:
I love this shot because I love to exemplify the beauty of the woman's body with my photography, even if it is just a small glimpse of the bare back like in my submission to one of the last challenges. I love to show people how beautiful we women can really be!

<3 Sarah
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