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The Church Times
06/16/2003 03:36:13 PM
The Church Times
by hughletheren

Comment by frisca:
your framing of this church is really nice, the focus seems odd on the bushes, but no big deal. However, I seem to detect a white cast/haze over everything though. Maybe a levels adjustment? Just an idea! :)
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Moonshot
06/16/2003 01:58:03 PM
Moonshot
by hughletheren

Comment by eloise:
WOW. You must have an amazing lens, I can never get the moon anywhere near that big!
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Moonshot
06/16/2003 10:12:20 AM
Moonshot
by hughletheren

Comment by alanfreed:
Could be a teeny bit sharper, but I still enjoy shots of the moon. Definitely meets the challenge :)
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Moonshot
06/16/2003 02:42:41 AM
Moonshot
by hughletheren

Comment by DavidLevin:
Its a photo of a moon, i dont see why this would be intruiging or appealing in any way. 2
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Sweeter Treat
06/15/2003 09:35:49 AM
Sweeter Treat
by hughletheren

Comment by Koriyama:
*critique club*

Overall
The rich colour palate certainly supports the feeling of a ‘Sweeter Treat’. You have succeeded in creating a warm atmosphere, a cosy image probably fitting a commercial use if the logo were present. Technically, your choice of aperture captures the detail well, your shutter speed stops the movement crisply, your lighting presents the material reasonably securely and your composition is cropped cleanly with no superfluous elements. There appears to be some blurring on the bottle cap, but otherwise, the shot has been executed well. You have captured the flavour (sorry, the pun had to be put in somewhere, best at the beginning) of the challenge by presenting not only liquid but a function of the liquid. To this extent, the shot succeeds. However, this success is limited when purely graphic elements are considered.

Artistic and Conceptual Considerations
I have a number of problems with this image. Graphically, a key element is the repeating arcs. However, due to the camera angle chosen and the choice of pitch black background, these arcs conflict rather than complement each other. I would have preferred a dual tone background, one which sets off the horizontal from the vertical. At present, the bowl seems to be at a warped angle to the background. A lower camera angle would have equalised the arcs and balanced the angle of the bowl to the background. In other words, there is a lack of perspective which makes viewing the image difficult, although the pitch black backing is classy. I can see why you would like to use it.

Returning to the arc theme, a horizontal bottle cap would have continued the theme nicely, and you might have taken trouble to ensure that all arcs were of the same angle, or if different, pleasingly contrastive. The bottle needs to be lifted for gravity to make the liquid fall out. Could the lines of the bottle be positioned to balance those of the glass?

I feel that the pitch black backing was a mistake, not only for the reasons mentioned above. To ensure the integrity of the black, you needed to use a fast shutter speed and some exposure compensation. You spot lit areas of the scene which emphasised graphic elements – the arcs – (I suspect unintentionally) in order to provide enough light for the actual thematic elements – the ice-cream, syrup and bottle. Better would have been to have provided a much more balanced lighting, avoiding the unwanted reflection on the left-hand side of the glass, chose a background colour to complement the colours of the elements and exposed for the syrup itself. At present, the syrup, ostensibly the main element, is hardly visible. I suggest that you consult a colour chart for complementary or contrastive colours for the syrup and place that at the back. You’ll find the tonal range of the resulting image considerably different from the present one, but more vital and, possibly, more rewarding.

The weakness of the syrup is made even more problematic by pouring it *behind* the ice-cream. At the very least, it should come directly on top, better still, to the front of the image. Compositionally, a lower camera angle would force a scene with a much higher level of ice-cream, above the bowl rim level (and of course, more to eat later!). Then, you could be afforded with a more face-on camera angle which would emphasise the space between the bottle cap and the ice-cream mountain. (A well-lit light-cream backing would really be effective here in turning the syrup stream into a viable graphic element.) I would also suggest you take a white balance reading from the ice-cream, which would help align the colour coordination throughout the scene, although I don’t believe that there are any colour problems here with your presentation.

A Second Overall
You executed your vision well. However, that vision was not entirely inspired nor executed with a concept of graphic understanding. The shots that won this particular challenge were all completely wonderful in their use of the camera as a device that captures prepared graphics. This shot has some of that potential. I hope that you find my suggestions useful.

Best wishes,

Jim
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Office paraphernalia or is it ....?
06/13/2003 02:27:28 PM
Office paraphernalia or is it ....?
by hughletheren

Comment by eloise:
Definintely a ten from me, though admittedly it scores higher on concept than execution. :-> The execution's all right, but not Freaking Amazing. Concept is really, really cute, though.
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The Church Times
06/13/2003 10:22:19 AM
The Church Times
by hughletheren

Comment by gaja_tz:
excellent shot@8
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The Church Times
06/13/2003 02:27:41 AM
The Church Times
by hughletheren

Comment by ChrisW123:
Should have cropped out 1/3 of the picture (the left). That HUGE bush/tree is hurting my eyes.
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Office paraphernalia or is it ....?
06/12/2003 09:36:16 PM
Office paraphernalia or is it ....?
by hughletheren

Comment by inspzil:
I used to have highlighters like that. I thought they came from Japan though. I've never seen another like it. This photo needs to be a little less flat and have a little more "wow"factor in it.
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Office paraphernalia or is it ....?
06/12/2003 03:43:02 PM
Office paraphernalia or is it ....?
by hughletheren

Comment by crabappl3:
OK, I usually don't like these types of shots, but I must say that this is very well done! I like just about everything about it. Good work, nice sense of humor. 9 -danny
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