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01/10/2004 04:51:33 PM · #1 |
Greets all!
I took a few pics of an antique clock and pocket watch. I titled it "Lost Time". I really like the pic, but I feel there is something missing.
The wrinkled background is intentional, as is the sepia tone.
I've posted two versions, one with normal color, and one white balanced to simulate sepia tone.
CAUTION: Images may take a long time to load, I'm learning a new HTML program, and am having trouble with the image sizing.
BTW, you've heard the saying "Wound up like an eight-day clock"? Now you've seen one.
Thanx for any and all input,
Burgy.
//webpages.charter.net/sburgan/lost_time.html |
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01/10/2004 05:00:28 PM · #2 |
There sure is something missing -- the hands! (couldn't resist)
One thing that struck me is that the composition seems flat. Could be the monocrome? It's hard to compose 2 things - an odd number is easlier. The larger clock sits square to the camera so that's not adding the interest it could. The smaller clock is a bit washed out.
It is a fine shot and I see the potential you feel is there. The title is creative and ties in nicely.
Message edited by author 2004-01-10 17:01:50. |
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01/10/2004 05:37:14 PM · #3 |
| I'm not sure how what's missing but I definitely prefer the sepia colouring. |
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01/10/2004 06:18:11 PM · #4 |
Have you tried adding a little grain (noise) to the photo? Not alot, just a slight amount. I feel that sometimes that can add a little character and make the picture look a little older, antiqued if you will, if done correctly.
I prefer the sepia tone, also. And the suggestion That Admart made about the flatness was good. Maybe you can try to angle the larger clock to add more depth or offset it so it's not dead center of the picture. Of course, these are just suggestions from an amature. :) I really like what you're trying to do.
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01/10/2004 06:32:05 PM · #5 |
played around a bit with the image...hope you don't mind. here's my take on it. 
changed the tone, adjusted the levels and did some slight dodging on the clock face and burning on the wood. |
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01/10/2004 06:59:58 PM · #6 |
sher9204 - like what you did -- what exactly is dodging? And how did you get the jpg to play with?
Less brightness on the curtain helps put the focus on the clocks. |
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01/10/2004 10:49:09 PM · #7 |
Originally posted by admart01:
sher9204 - like what you did -- what exactly is dodging? And how did you get the jpg to play with?
Less brightness on the curtain helps put the focus on the clocks. |
thanks :) this site will probably explain much better than i could.
Dodging and Burning |
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01/11/2004 09:17:34 AM · #8 |
Excellent suggestions all. I'll play with dodge/burn and see what I can do. I may also reshoot the pic and tinker with the lighting a bit.
I like what you did with it sher9204, but I still prefer the sepia tone version.
I also think the image might be a little too tight, meaning I need more background. Mabye zoom in a little less?
I shot it on top of my scanner on my computer desk. so I was limited as to how much background I could include.
Hmmm, you guys have got my brain workin', and that's a start. (As long as I don't blow a fuse!)
Thanx to all,
Burgy. |
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01/11/2004 09:46:51 AM · #9 |
| I like the sepia shot. you might try changing the angle, and or adding some clock parts. |
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