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01/31/2011 06:52:09 PM · #1 |
First off, I hope I am allowed to do this and am putting this in the correct part of the forum.
I have several pictures of a national guard shooting team practice that I attend every month. I am hoping someone may give me a few critiques here and there for the next time I shoot with them (well shoot something that doesn't go 'bang' with them).
shooting info:
Sony A500
minolta 50mm F1.7
average f-stop: 1.7-2.2
Iso 800-1600
shutter speed 1/2800-4000
I will post more images, but for now (due to time constraints) I have this one ready to go (I only put about 3-4 minutes of digital enhancement into the image)
Original thompson machine gun
Any tips would be appreciated,
Travis Walthall
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01/31/2011 07:30:41 PM · #2 |
Actually, the correct forum for that is "Individual photograph discussion". The critique club is actually something slightly different from what you are looking for.
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01/31/2011 07:41:44 PM · #3 |
It's an interesting shot, but the shells being discharged are very small in the frame and get kind of lost in the background. I guess the actual crop you use depends on what you want to convey and show.
A clickable thumbnail will probably get more people looking at it to offer feedback. Photobucket did have that ability to give me code for a thumbnail:
I did a quick edit of my own on it. Cropped, applied a little clarify, some saturation, contrast and sharpening.
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02/01/2011 01:14:21 AM · #4 |
Thank you very much, I will go ahead and put a little more time into them and start up a thread in the proper area.
Thank you again,
Travis Walthall |
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02/01/2011 01:25:13 AM · #5 |
Originally posted by Yo_Spiff:
Actually, the correct forum for that is "Individual photograph discussion". The critique club is actually something slightly different from what you are looking for. |
plus they don't actually critique photos....they disbanded after they made the business cards... |
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02/01/2011 07:37:11 AM · #6 |
| I was going to say. I haven't seen one of those critique club messages on a photo in ages. |
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