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 10/03/2012 04:35:33 PM · #1
This is a test composite for a project I'm working on. C&C welcome -- especially with regards to anything that might be missing that should be added.



Message edited by author 2012-10-03 16:36:37.
 10/03/2012 04:40:08 PM · #2
id get rid of the right angle shadow under his boot
 10/03/2012 05:34:38 PM · #3
The edge of the white/light/bright area at the top is too hard, but only in the center.
 10/03/2012 06:07:40 PM · #4
i m liking it as is, would like to see what itd look like with Giles' suggestion implemented, but i m diggin the look
 10/03/2012 06:11:31 PM · #5
I like it, but the missing "L" is a little distracting for me.
 10/03/2012 06:21:36 PM · #6
Awesome as is.
 10/03/2012 06:53:18 PM · #7
maybe it is me as I despise american football and don't follow it but are the proportions accurate? The ball seems awfully big or his arms seem very small.
 10/03/2012 06:55:13 PM · #8
good stuff, i agree with the earlier recommendations.
 10/04/2012 12:17:27 AM · #9
Originally posted by Giles_uk:
id get rid of the right angle shadow under his boot


It's a real shadow.
 10/04/2012 12:17:44 AM · #10
Originally posted by MinsoPhoto:
maybe it is me as I despise american football and don't follow it but are the proportions accurate? The ball seems awfully big or his arms seem very small.


The football is not part of the composite. He was holding it in the original image.
 10/04/2012 12:18:26 AM · #11
Originally posted by PuppyDogMom:
I like it, but the missing "L" is a little distracting for me.


I was wondering about this. I've gotten 50/50 on it. Just not sure what to do, lol.
 10/04/2012 12:23:44 AM · #12
Originally posted by Cory:
The edge of the white/light/bright area at the top is too hard, but only in the center.


I saw that after I uploaded it to flickr -- not sure why I didn't catch it sooner. It won't be there when the final is done. Thanks!
 10/04/2012 02:51:40 AM · #13
Originally posted by kgeary:
Originally posted by Giles_uk:
id get rid of the right angle shadow under his boot


It's a real shadow.


So?? You can still get rid of it doesn't have to stay

I'm with the others the L needs to be on show 100%
 10/04/2012 03:42:29 AM · #14
The curved shadow (not the small oval spot) has to go and a small part of the L's horizontal bar has to show. Other than that it's perfect.
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