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05/25/2005 03:26:47 PM · #1 |
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Rise in Pants, Click Click
Crushing blows to face and neck
neighbors wife; taboo
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My lens is too small
Hatred swells, the bitter sting
Camera Envy!
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05/25/2005 03:42:54 PM · #2 |
Early grass on fire:
low light from the east consumes
shadow as it grows.
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Twilight gleaming blue:
fading in the west, the sky
drags shadow to dark.
Robt.
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05/25/2005 03:46:51 PM · #3 |
a short lens captured
an image of a woman.
a long lens needed.
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05/25/2005 03:53:32 PM · #4 |
Image in my mind
Matching not what lies on screen...
Mediocrity
Gently urban spring
Bent grass seeking pixel pairs
Green squares overwhelm. |
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05/25/2005 04:11:38 PM · #5 |
I just looked up dictionary.com to find what Haiku means. And here's what I came up with... Let me know if I understood it correctly.
longing for love;
I looked close, trying to capture
the sunset in her eyes
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05/25/2005 04:12:56 PM · #6 |
Originally posted by blindjustice:
Rise in Pants, Click Click
Crushing blows to face and neck
neighbors wife; taboo |
roflmao!
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05/25/2005 04:13:54 PM · #7 |
Originally posted by bledford:
Image in my mind
Matching not what lies on screen...
Mediocrity
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oh that's awesome.
:rock |
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05/25/2005 04:36:02 PM · #8 |
No place for CMOS
Eyes record the best there is
I'm a camera |
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05/25/2005 04:55:23 PM · #9 |
shutter goes snap snap
neighbor shuts window, calls cops
hurry, upload RAW
Message edited by author 2005-05-25 16:56:26. |
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05/25/2005 04:59:48 PM · #10 |
Black label Jack drink
camera seeing double
how did I get here?
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05/25/2005 05:05:27 PM · #11 |
white valleys and hills:
Cocoa butter, sweet sugar
cream moulded landscape
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05/25/2005 05:06:30 PM · #12 |
craving more L glass
deep pockets I do not have
settle for tamron |
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05/25/2005 05:12:28 PM · #13 |
Originally posted by Fetor:
craving more L glass
deep pockets I do not have
settle for tamron |
i can say the same. even though im trying to get an xt
Message edited by author 2005-05-25 17:12:49. |
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05/25/2005 05:14:13 PM · #14 |
dpchallenges
update button addict
even at three.one
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05/25/2005 07:50:22 PM · #15 |
Snap snap snap snap snap
Snap snap snap snap snap snap snap
Snap snap snap snap snap
or
If cameras were guns
I'm sure I'd be deaf by now
Too bad my aim sucks...
or
I just can't do well
Too bad scoring's not like golf
Where being sub-par's good.
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Camera's it's said
steal souls. What a lie that is:
They steal your money. |
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05/25/2005 08:00:03 PM · #16 |
Decisive moment,
could have been a great capture,
but mem'ry card's full.
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05/25/2005 08:20:30 PM · #17 |
I wrote a haiku
As a comment on a pic
Mine? Yours? I forget. |
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05/25/2005 08:45:05 PM · #18 |
Creating photos:
The sun sinks into the sea.
Time for Jeopardy
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05/25/2005 08:52:26 PM · #19 |
Originally posted by Pug-H:
I wrote a haiku
As a comment on a pic
Mine? Yours? I forget. |
Pug,
The above, with one minor exception, are actually a fine example of a certain genre of Haiku. Traditionally, haiku will be focused on and indication of time or a season, but another subset are like little Zen Koans, and yours is like that. Here's how I'd change it:
I wrote some lines
as a comment on a pic ΓΆ€”
mine? Yours? I forget.
See why?
Wonderful job! Hat's off to a fine little verse.
Robt.
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05/25/2005 09:00:27 PM · #20 |
I think poetry
is just a big waste of time
I don't write any |
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05/25/2005 09:11:38 PM · #21 |
A poet can see
a photographer who hears
the tone of a line.
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05/25/2005 09:29:25 PM · #22 |
spring red glows softly
upon holly's minted leaves
early berries shine
foals dancing with mares
upon carpets of daisys
whickers greet the eve |
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05/25/2005 09:36:32 PM · #23 |
Originally posted by bear_music:
I wrote some lines
as a comment on a pic ΓΆ€”
mine? Yours? I forget. |
Master poet bear
perplexes computer geek
by a line of four.
Nordlys |
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05/25/2005 09:43:15 PM · #24 |
Originally posted by bear_music:
Originally posted by Pug-H:
I wrote a haiku
As a comment on a pic
Mine? Yours? I forget. |
I wrote some lines
as a comment on a pic ΓΆ€”
mine? Yours? I forget.
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Thanks, Robert. But remember, a haiku should be 5-7-5 syllables (though in Japanese, the word "haiku" is actually three syllables). When I'm back on my own internet connection (and not on this slower school one), I'll see if I can find that photo comment haiku I wrote.
Message edited by author 2005-05-26 01:04:40. |
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05/25/2005 09:56:44 PM · #25 |
Originally posted by Pug-H:
..remember, a haiku should be 5-7-5 syllables (though in Japanese, the word "haiku" is actually three syllables)... |
Like all good pommes, haiku is about syncing sound and sense. To transport the whole thing, relatively intact, into English, I say, forget the 5-7-5 and follow your English or American ears. That is, after all, how the Japanese arrived at it.
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