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05/08/2006 12:25:24 PM · #1
In the spirit of DrAchoo's weekly thread, I'll throw my critiques at the first 20 Photojournalism entries posted to this thread.
05/08/2006 12:32:23 PM · #2
Mine is a 5.7 and you commented.

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But someone posted this

I bet Leroy nailed you on the title. Those pesky photojournalism majors.

and was wondering was wrong with the title?


05/08/2006 12:35:44 PM · #3
Originally posted by rex:

Mine is a 5.7 and you commented.

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But someone posted this

I bet Leroy nailed you on the title. Those pesky photojournalism majors.

and was wondering was wrong with the title?


I actually liked the title. I thought it was good considering the people could have been on a field trip and then of cousre the school of fish. I didn't love the photo because of the bluring but it definantly makes me want to go to the aquarium mroe next month when I am there.

Edit: just actually read your notes and saw that that is what you were going for:)

Message edited by author 2006-05-08 12:37:33.
05/08/2006 01:02:35 PM · #4
Originally posted by rex:

Mine is a 5.7 and you commented.

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But someone posted this

I bet Leroy nailed you on the title. Those pesky photojournalism majors.

and was wondering was wrong with the title?


Since you were the first to post, I left a comment. Actually, the title didn't take away from your photo here.
05/08/2006 01:49:00 PM · #5
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I've already gotten plenty of comments on this but what's a few more? Also, it scored a 5.3 so lets pretend it scored a 5.2. :P
05/08/2006 03:26:55 PM · #6
yanko, since the turn-out is not so good so far, I left ya a critique...

anyone else?
05/08/2006 10:36:25 PM · #7
bump... no one?
05/08/2006 11:27:16 PM · #8
Maybe you should offer government cheese or something. :P
05/08/2006 11:36:04 PM · #9
Originally posted by yanko:

Maybe you should offer government cheese or something. :P


Maybe... orrrr they want DrAchoo
05/08/2006 11:49:08 PM · #10
Come on people, I'm not the be all of commenting. Leroy has more photojournalism education than I've ever had. We all complain about not enough comments...
05/08/2006 11:52:10 PM · #11
I'd take you up on it, but you already commented on mine during the challenge. I do really love that you guys do these critique's of us mediocre people...
05/09/2006 12:01:14 AM · #12
Originally posted by margiemu:

I'd take you up on it, but you already commented on mine during the challenge. I do really love that you guys do these critique's of us mediocre people...


I leftacomment on all of them... so bring it on. :-) I want to give more constructve critiques on the mid-range performers.
05/09/2006 12:02:00 AM · #13
Originally posted by margiemu:

I'd take you up on it, but you already commented on mine during the challenge. I do really love that you guys do these critique's of us mediocre people...


the way i look at critiques is that it's a way for us to learn as well :)
05/09/2006 12:18:38 AM · #14
all righty then, critique away Ü
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05/09/2006 12:46:56 AM · #15
Originally posted by margiemu:

all righty then, critique away Ü
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okie dokie, got ya done.
05/09/2006 12:56:32 AM · #16
Is this one better? I actually picked the other because you can see both the players in it. This one is sharper. I need to swallow my pride and get glasses, because half the time I don't notice the out of focus issue :(
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05/09/2006 01:04:13 AM · #17
Originally posted by margiemu:

Is this one better? I actually picked the other because you can see both the players in it. This one is sharper. I need to swallow my pride and get glasses, because half the time I don't notice the out of focus issue :(
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Much better.

And yes, do wear your glasses... I know it's a vanity thing, but take it from me, it's hard to be a blind photog.
05/09/2006 01:46:09 AM · #18
ok leroy, had a comment from you, but had lots of comments saying is not quite dead and low contrast, any further comment?

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05/09/2006 01:47:11 AM · #19
Originally posted by richard42:

had lots of comments saying is not quite dead


So basically they wanted you or that model dead? That's some harsh comments you got. :P
05/09/2006 02:01:39 AM · #20
Originally posted by richard42:

ok leroy, had a comment from you, but had lots of comments saying is not quite dead and low contrast, any further comment?


I'll start on it in the morning with a fresh set of eyes. I liked the idea, btw.

OK, night crew give me some more to look forward to in the morning.

Message edited by author 2006-05-09 02:01:58.
05/09/2006 02:40:54 AM · #21
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I'd like that. You did leave a comment back then. This is really European news but should be interesting for "the others".
05/09/2006 03:25:59 AM · #22
Originally posted by yanko:

Originally posted by richard42:

had lots of comments saying is not quite dead


So basically they wanted you or that model dead? That's some harsh comments you got. :P


:)

i must say i was very greatful for all the comments made!
05/09/2006 04:21:21 AM · #23
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I come seeking your advice if you don't mind a 6.5(but please.. hold the cheese :) ). I wouldn't mind an in depth critique seeing I was thinking about signing up as an PJ for the college paper and see what happens from there. aside from the obvious the ball is not in the picture but rather in his glove.Tthe photo had some nice movement in it so thats why I chose it.

as of right now I shoot some events for practice to test the waters so to speak. Also some other pointers about PJ wouldn't hurt :).

Thanks in advance

Message edited by author 2006-05-09 04:31:47.
05/09/2006 10:31:42 AM · #24
Didn't submit it :Pocket Billiards

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05/09/2006 10:41:58 AM · #25
If you wouldn't mind...

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Thanks!

~Terry
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