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02/14/2009 02:34:49 AM · #1
Hello. I would love if some advanced photographers could give me some feedback on my first work in a studio (and also my second series of portraits).

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02/17/2009 12:17:04 PM · #2
Are they that horrible that nobody can dare attempt to comment?
02/17/2009 01:04:52 PM · #3
This is a strong start, yet there are a few things you may want to work with.

The highlights are strong enough to be a bit over the top, which would indicate that you're overexposed.

The fill on some of the shots is almost equal to the main light which gives a stange sense of having two light sources, instead of a reflected light. It has an unnatural feel.

I like your eye contact in 1, 2 & 5.
02/17/2009 01:30:28 PM · #4
Originally posted by BK26:

Are they that horrible that nobody can dare attempt to comment?


No, not at all, but you did ask for "advanced photographers" so it may be that you're losing a large population of commentators.
02/17/2009 01:53:21 PM · #5
Originally posted by Bebe:

Originally posted by BK26:

Are they that horrible that nobody can dare attempt to comment?


No, not at all, but you did ask for "advanced photographers" so it may be that you're losing a large population of commentators.


Hahahah!! Indeed...
I'm not advanced, but i really liked the first shot!
02/17/2009 02:46:06 PM · #6
Good to see that deviantart is still running on a couple of shotgunned modems...

Will try again later, maybe it will be speedier. Thumbs look interesting.
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