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04/16/2012 02:54:14 AM |
I think a much tighter crop on this might have interested me more. I like the gleaming colour of the key. |
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04/14/2012 07:58:55 PM |
really nice dof. I like how the mat is positioned...horiz along the front, and angled as it extends into the image |
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04/14/2012 02:25:09 PM |
Originally posted by FourPointX: awesome idea, almost well executed, love the dof but someone earlier commented about the angle to the key...to see more shape would have helped. |
Agreed. |
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04/13/2012 11:26:48 AM |
awesome idea, almost well executed, love the dof but someone earlier commented about the angle to the key...to see more shape would have helped. |
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04/13/2012 09:14:59 AM |
Great shallow DOF and focus. |
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04/13/2012 08:56:47 AM |
The key shines! Terrific point of focus. |
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04/13/2012 12:00:46 AM |
I think this is one of my favourite's that you have done. Like your POV, focus & tones. The debris doesn't really bother me -isn't that what outdoor matts are for? (well, I do just want to remove that white bit) |
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04/12/2012 05:40:24 PM |
I agree with Jon_H about the debris. LOVE the DOF. |
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04/12/2012 05:22:54 PM |
I like the angles that run through the image and it certainly looks natural but there are pieces of debris that are competing for the viewers attention. |
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04/12/2012 05:02:29 PM |
I like the concept here...Nice DOF. I think I would have changed the angle slightly |
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03/30/2012 06:53:45 AM |
thats funny,i had the same idea ,only iwould have not shown the key at all
but i thought that would have been the brown one
so i left it (the challenge) alone |
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03/28/2012 07:19:06 AM |
The angle is too steep to actually make out the shape of key. Still a good attempt. Goodluck. |
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03/24/2012 03:29:34 PM |
Good use of selective focus. Maybe edit out the bright white fiber near the left edge, and get closer to the key so that it fills more of the frame. |
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