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Challenge: Framing (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Olympus Stylus 400 Digital
Location: my driveway
Date: Aug 29, 2004
Aperture: f 5.2
ISO: 64
Shutter: 1/320
Date Uploaded: Aug 29, 2004

umm this is my first submission here, stoked just to get any feedback!


cropped, levels, duotone, unsharp mask, rotate

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Place: 97 out of 305
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Votes: 323
Comments: 23
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09/07/2004 09:28:37 PM
good framing, I like the way her hair is captured floating, gives a sense of motion.
some critique, I would have loved to see some more texture on the ball, it kind of makes the whole picture dull at this time.
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09/07/2004 08:09:03 PM
Great Job :-)
09/07/2004 07:25:19 PM
cute picture. I would have never thought of that idea for framing. great work. good DOF in this shot.
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09/06/2004 12:08:39 PM
Wonderful light quality, but It seems a bit posed.
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09/05/2004 09:54:01 PM
I like the idea, but visually im alittle confused as to why she is laying down with a basketball on her face...Im assuming that if she was standing up with the ball, it would have been too close....it sorta messes the picture up for me...plus, i dont really like the b&w sepia-ish look...i would have liked to have seen, at least, the orange ball contrasting against the white net.....
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09/04/2004 04:33:22 PM
Unique take on framing - excellent idea.
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09/04/2004 07:27:42 AM
nice
09/03/2004 02:21:34 PM
cool idea but why not keep the colors ?
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09/03/2004 08:37:02 AM
Very creative indeed, I love it.
09/03/2004 12:02:35 AM
I would like to see a little more of the face. Great idea; awesome!
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09/02/2004 05:55:00 PM
Very creative!
09/02/2004 01:02:08 PM
Wow. Took me a minute to realise it was looking down through the net. What a great idea. Nicely done. Not sure if I am really crazy about the tone/color, but I don't think it hurts the image at all. Good job.
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09/02/2004 07:55:24 AM
Nice. Is the bball net actually that close to the ground?
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09/01/2004 05:25:45 PM
Very original!
09/01/2004 02:10:02 PM
Nice work, I like the frame you chose. It took me a second to figure out what was going on in the picture, but now I see. I wonder about the placement of the basketball though. It is where my eye fell, but I think the focus should be the subjects face.
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09/01/2004 10:24:29 AM
I would have given this a much higher score if I could see the face! I like the angle of the shot! Creative.
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09/01/2004 06:49:30 AM
Amazing point of view!! a 10 for sure!!
:)
09/01/2004 04:49:58 AM
This image works really well.
09/01/2004 04:27:42 AM
I would like to see more of her
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09/01/2004 02:42:32 AM
Very nice.
09/01/2004 02:39:37 AM
Great idea. Next time, forget the ball and ask her to just lay with her arms out to the side, maybe closing her eyes. And place her a little more down in the frame. But as I said, good idea, just work on it.
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09/01/2004 01:41:15 AM
Nice picture
09/01/2004 01:23:32 AM
Very creative! The sepia is just a little too yellow for me, causing a brightness that takes away from the overall look
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