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11/12/2003 06:21:56 PM |
| Just Willie and the Boys eh? |
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01/10/2003 11:07:04 PM |
Critique Club critique:
Composition/Content: I think you had a good idea but had trouble putting it together. There are too many things in the photograph. It might have worked better if you had draped the Mexican blanket and arranged a smaller number of things on it or around it. I think people would have understood "travel to Mexico" with just the travel bag with the top closed and one or two of the Mexican items arranged on or around it.
Background: The background looks set-up because the bend in the blanket at the bottom of the picture shows the table's edge. This distracts from the subject.
Camera Work/Technical: The exposure is right and the image is in focus.
Digital Processing: I agree with a previous comment that Mexico is traditionally very colorful and making the image with rich colors would be more effective.
My Opinion: The image depicts travel to Mexico but needs pizazz, color, and excitement, all of which could be expressed with color and a more creative presentation.
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01/05/2003 01:17:57 AM |
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01/02/2003 06:08:04 PM |
| An arranged setting of boring items = twice as boring. |
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01/02/2003 05:20:38 AM |
| Have maracas, will travel - Inspzil |
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01/01/2003 09:00:26 PM |
| No black and white with these beautiful artifacts from Mexico. You just commited the deadly sin in my book. Mexican things have such beautiful colors, and I love to see the colors. Shame, shame. Went from a 9 down to a 6. Shame. PTL To ahve been a 9 you know it had to be a flauless photo with pizazz. |
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