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06/25/2012 01:35:52 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club :)
Composition:
I like the negative space on the left of this shot, although I do feel that it's a bit tight on the bottom, maybe a little more reflection would give a bit more balance to the image.
Technicals:
Looks sharp enough and the exposure looks ok too.
Post-Processing:
The Bananna looks a little flat maybe a curves and contrast adjustment could have helped lift it a little. Plus a little sharpening too, although having said that the dandelion looks quite sharp so it's unfortunate that it's basic editing and you couldn't selectively sharpen.
My Opinion:
Quite like the image actually and with a slightly different crop and some more editing in photoshop this could have scored better, I know the subject was mundane but I think this needed a little more in the WOW factor, think Mundane on steroids - something that makes the viewer go "Wow now that's a Bananna shot!" or something similar ;)
Hope this was of some use, should you wish to discuss any part of the critique further please feel free to PM me.
Good luck in future challenges!
Mark |
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06/15/2012 12:04:17 PM |
| Interesting. The even light worked well for this image. |
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06/13/2012 02:13:59 PM |
| Nice concept here. I think the shot needs more of the reflection in it, less of the white space at the top. |
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