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01/06/2003 01:42:52 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club :)
When I first viewed this photograph, I did not really see 'Travel' in it. The image itself does not show travel taking place or a mode of travel. I do see your intent with the photo, but I think, in general, you may have deviated too far from the theme of the challenge to score better with this image.
I think a little lower angle possibly would be an improvement so that the information on the computer screen is more visible to the viewer. With an image like this, however, the viewer will have to spend too much time viewing to really grasp your interpretation of the challenge. For this reason, I believe that your comments were few and far between. There is nothing here that grabbed the viewer and said "spend some time looking at me" :)
Technically, I don't see any problems with this image at all. Subjectively, I think it could have been stronger.
The technical ability tells me that you can definitely have command of your camera... keep plugging :)
John Setzler
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01/05/2003 12:49:06 AM |
| Nice, interesting, everythign on focus. |
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01/04/2003 08:09:01 PM |
| Is that a graph of projected velocity or ticket prices? |
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01/04/2003 12:24:58 PM |
| A nice commentary to the theme although the picture as such is fairly plain. |
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12/31/2002 10:39:23 PM |
| OK. I get it, now. The angles of items are a little hard on the eyes, and the neck. Personally I think it is cropped a little too tightly. Pull back and give yourself some breathing room. I feel there is no breathing room in this. Can you understand?` That's the major problems I see. Not bad. Good thought. I'll give it a 6. PTL |
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