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01/07/2003 08:38:31 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB!
Well, this definitely looks like it fits the challenge. However, I think that the subjects of the photo are giving a jumbled message that doesn't quite jive all together. I assume that the items indicating 3 separate countries was intended to convey the sense of moving from one place to another. This might have worked better if you had used three similar items from different places -- like three types of currency. It would have made a more eloquent statement.
Technically, the photo is not bad. The focus is a bit fuzzy on the koala bear and on the foreground of the pound note. The background does not stick out, and the lighting is fair and even. Is that a hair in the middle of the two passports? There is some kind of wrinkle in the file that pops out upon viewing for a little while. A little sidelighting (very little) would have also helped the koala paws not blend into the background so readily.
Overall, a decent still life and a good attempt at the challenge.
Rob |
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01/05/2003 12:40:28 AM |
Clear and almost perfect focus! |
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01/04/2003 07:11:18 PM |
Wow... your passports look so NEW and unrumpled! |
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01/03/2003 07:36:07 PM |
the second lot of canadian passeports |
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01/03/2003 01:11:06 PM |
Going to Australia? Why the koala? |
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01/01/2003 09:08:39 PM |
very sharp..uncluttered...and the destination very well done. |
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01/01/2003 08:26:29 PM |
Nice one. The black background works well here. The money is a nice touch. Adds color. Like the teddy bear, excuse me koila bear. This is a good photo a worthy of an 8. PTL |
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12/30/2002 05:06:04 AM |
Haven't seen a 1 pound note for a very long time! |
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12/30/2002 03:30:05 AM |
I see you have an Australian icon in there. Clarity and composition is very well done. |
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