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01/09/2003 04:57:02 PM |
Originally posted by DougPaz:
I hadn't noticed the bird outline until I read your note. |
Hey, didn't see it either. Very cool! (adds shot to favs)
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01/09/2003 03:39:41 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club };-)
Initial thoughts
Good composition, meets the challenge, color could be a bit more intense
Composition/ Content
I think that the folks that voted this shot low must have never tried photographing moving birds. It is incredibly tough and I think you did a great job. I really like the way you cropped and composed this. The birds seem to be pointing South as well as flying there. I hadn't noticed the bird outline until I read your note. I even like the border. It appears that you caught them in a late afternoon sun as well which warms the bodies of some of the birds.
Background
Gee, couldn't you have moved a nice puffy white cloud in there or something? Just kidding, the background is great.
Camera Work - Technical
Focus seems good and contrast is excellent. It would be nice to be a bit closer but we are probably at the lense limitations.
Digital Processing - Technical
I noticed that you are only at about 100kb. I wonder if a bit closer to the allowed 150kb would have made this even crisper. The only other thing is I would like to see this with a touch more blue in the background. Did you try playing with the hue?
Fits The Challenge
Definitely fits the challenge well.
My Opinion On The Photo I originally scored this shot an aeight. I think it should have finished even higher than it did. Like I said, you've got to try shooting these things before you can really appreciat the shot. Good job, and keep up the good work.
I would be happy to talk further about this shot if you would like to contact me.
DougPaz
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01/05/2003 10:26:04 PM |
| Wonderful capture of those birds migrating. Composition is great. Good luck! |
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01/05/2003 12:54:57 AM |
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01/04/2003 07:13:18 PM |
| Very clear shot, the birds seem to be very far away. Yet there is still detail under the wings and in the head area. Shot with a low sun? The frame enhances the image, not bad at all. |
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01/04/2003 12:31:14 PM |
| A good comment to the theme and an image of the beauty of nature. |
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01/03/2003 01:34:03 PM |
| Wish the blue was bluer, might'e done a bit of hue adjustment. |
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01/02/2003 08:43:30 AM |
| Nice shot. Meets the challenge. Focus and lighting are good. 7 waltoml. |
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12/31/2002 01:27:08 AM |
| Sort of reminds me of Escher, without the morph :P |
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12/30/2002 01:17:18 AM |
| I can assure you this will be in my favorites. I keep missing this photo. By the time I get the camera out, they are gone. This is georgeous and a 10 in my book. PTL |
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