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09/12/2004 05:35:28 PM |
Neat idea, well executed except I wish the horizon was straight. |
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09/12/2004 04:59:04 AM |
Nice setup and capture. good focus on the hands. Hard to tell the candle is lit (who cares) because of the great colors. The flash is just a touch to bright for me..toned down just a touch...perfect. Nice work |
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09/12/2004 01:48:06 AM |
nice shot but it really needs a bit of CW rotation. |
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09/07/2004 10:27:57 PM |
I like the concept, but the foreground lighting is too strong and makes the picture unnatural looking. I find the shirt to be a distraction too. Maybe grouping the objects tighter and cropping tighter would help. |
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09/07/2004 06:25:18 PM |
This is great. I can see it in a travel magazine ad. |
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09/07/2004 09:31:20 AM |
Nice use of fill-in flash |
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09/07/2004 04:49:17 AM |
IMO, too much light on the hnads, the bacground should be more into focus or more out of focus. Good idea for the travel gudie theme. |
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09/07/2004 01:58:32 AM |
A great scenic - lit with both backlight and flash. The border holds it together - coming from one who normally doesn't like them much. I wish you could tie it to a actual destination somehow. |
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09/06/2004 06:03:36 PM |
very reminiscent of shots I've seen in a few "getaway" brochures, so well done on that aspect. I would have liked to have seen the wine bottle, glass, and candle bowl in focus more. It would have given the image a little more weight, and a better strength to lead your eye to the background... which, by the way, is stunning.
it's a beautifully crafted scene otherwise, so keep it up :) |
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09/06/2004 02:07:19 PM |
Cool concept. Regarding composition the bottle is a little unworthy.The same about the streaky shirt. Maybe a cropping removing bottle would improve the picture. |
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09/06/2004 12:39:36 PM |
The lighting on the hands is too harsh. I would have liked if the wine bottle was uncorked. |
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09/06/2004 10:02:56 AM |
NIce idea, but the bottle, candle and glass also need to be in sharp focus for this to really work. Increase the dof just a little |
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09/06/2004 04:47:20 AM |
Nice blurring of the background but I wish the glass on the table (middleground) were in focus too, but that could just be personal preference. Light from flash a little bright, creating harsh shadow between hands. A bounced or diffused flash would've worked nicely. |
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09/06/2004 03:40:22 AM |
this pic has such promise but does not quite work out for me, lovely idea though |
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