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02/24/2013 12:01:34 AM |
| A model? You used a model?? Ah, I'll forgive you. The lovely balance between light and shadow makes the location worthy of stuffing a model in there. |
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02/22/2013 12:44:37 PM |
| It's good to be your neighbor in this challenge, Don :-) |
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02/21/2013 10:10:26 PM |
Critique Club Here!
This is funny to me that I got your image as my second one. I've always been unsure that I understood your vision with your photograpy but every once in a while you have one that stikes a cord with me. Oddly enough, this is one of those images.
My immediate reaction when looking at the image was much like all the commenters, I was struck by the light and the way it frames your subject. Also we see a nice use of the rule of thirds. It seems like the b&w conversion could have just a tad more punch to it, but not enough that I think it takes way from the image.
The one thing that really jumps out to me that I would change about this image is the models stance. I would not have said this were it a candid but since you set up the shot, I really think being able to see the side of the models face perhaps having them walk by the wall a few times and catching them in stride would have really given it that feel of catching someone going about the mundane duties if their life. That, to me anyway, is really the essence of many of Jagar's shots.
Overall I really enjoy this image and you got a fairly decent spread from the voters. I think they can be pretty harsh when they are expecting you to imitate someone. Nice work. :) |
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02/20/2013 06:59:48 PM |
| You fooled me... nothing pale in sight. Love it. |
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02/20/2013 12:01:40 PM |
Dressed up a model in a few coats
love that. This has the feeling of a jagar. |
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02/20/2013 09:47:52 AM |
| Lawrence of Arabia as an old man retracing his steps. Quite haunting. |
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02/20/2013 12:41:28 AM |
| I thought this wonderfully peculiar, possessed of an odd sort of kinetic energy. And now, hilariously, I see that I was right. |
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02/20/2013 12:14:49 AM |
| Thought this would do better - stoopid auto correct on my iPad. - you realise that should have said light :) |
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02/20/2013 12:10:25 AM |
| This is good stuff. Should have scored higher just on content alone. |
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02/20/2013 12:08:22 AM |
| I gave this a 7. The capture of light is so fantastic! |
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02/19/2013 10:34:34 PM |
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02/18/2013 11:08:00 PM |
| This is good, nice light. |
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02/18/2013 05:25:00 PM |
| Voted already. This is truly my favourite in the whole challenge. It's the late - just perfect. |
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02/17/2013 07:07:36 PM |
| Nice timing with the light! |
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02/15/2013 11:55:59 PM |
| Beautiful capture. The way the light splits the shadow and highlights the woman is perfect! |
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02/14/2013 07:19:54 AM |
| You caught her right in that light, well done. |
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