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01/13/2003 09:15:40 AM |
Critique Club by Inspzil
Composition - I really like the colors of this image. You took this pic at a great time. The lighting is excellent really bringing out the colors. The thing I notice most about this picture is the arch of the pier. It could be used to frame the stuff behind it. I think this would help in a couple of ways - First, it narrows the field of view which might bring a stronger focal point forward. Secondly, I think switching it from portrait to landscape orientation will make it feel more natural. I think there is too much unnecessary stuff in the frame. I inspect these kind of bridge beams for a living. I like to see them, but it isn't necessary for this picture.
Photography - Exposure is great. The lighting had to be good there. The colors are awesome. The framing is the only thing that I would change about the whole picture. The rest of it is great.
Processing - Nothing is standing out, so that's good
Overall - This is a pretty good picture with a lot of potential to be much better. And I don't think it would take too much. Maybe even just a tighter crop and switching from portrait to landscape. Hope this helps a little. I enjoyed the shot. - Bob |
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01/12/2003 11:41:12 PM |
| beautiful. wonder if you could send this to any of the artists that worked on it. i noticed a website on some real sweet graphitti art in queens, ny a while back. reflections, and the erosion creeping down the wall from above, make this really really cool. depth of field snuck up on me. really wild, really good, can i buy a print? really though, wanna give an eleven. perfect pic for the song, you gotta send it to the chili peppers. |
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01/12/2003 09:13:19 AM |
| Great shot, got to love those 'Red Hot Chilli Peppers'! |
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01/10/2003 11:12:44 AM |
| Great shot, just think the darker bottom part of the picture could have been cropped out. |
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01/09/2003 11:57:14 PM |
| I've bumped this up now 3 times..... The more i look, the more I like it. This it great lighting for a dark place. Great color, perspective, artistic - one of my 10's this challenge. |
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01/09/2003 11:04:09 PM |
| Image is slightly angled but otherwise its a really nice shot. Always a big fan of colorful, textured and somewhat abstract images. This one surely fits the bill. Apart from levelling the pictures, I can offer no other way to improve it :) |
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01/08/2003 07:58:56 PM |
| Red Hot Chilli Pepper? Nice shot. I lke the colours. Jacko. |
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01/08/2003 02:19:03 PM |
| Never heard of the song, but a really cool picture. |
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01/08/2003 01:17:00 AM |
| love this shot. it is so beautiful |
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01/08/2003 01:08:21 AM |
This sure fits the title of the song. At first i didn't catch the depth of this shot, but now that I do I like it a lot better.7.
Take my comments for what they are worth for I am just a novice with a new camera. Dodo
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01/07/2003 11:55:20 PM |
| Good idea and nice clear photo. But this could have been taken anywhere. There's nothing in the photo to say it's taken "under the bridge". Maybe zoom out to show the bridge itself. I do like the grafitti though. As is it's a 5. PTL |
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01/07/2003 01:44:12 AM |
| It takes a moment to fully appreciate the depth of this picture. Very well lit, very good exposure, perhaps a bit more detail above the closest arch would have been nice. Other than that, a very enjoyable shot. 9 |
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01/06/2003 10:40:14 AM |
| Very nice capture of life underground...It still amazes me the hidden talents of so many people... |
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