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Sweet and Salty
Sweet and Salty
Tamrob


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Challenge: Wacky Foods (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix 3800
Location: Cincinnati Ohio
Date: Sep 27, 2004
Date Uploaded: Sep 27, 2004

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Place: 75 out of 154
Avg (all users): 5.0824
Avg (commenters): 6.8889
Avg (participants): 5.0244
Avg (non-participants): 5.1066
Views since voting: 543
Views during voting: 366
Votes: 279
Comments: 10
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10/12/2004 07:37:14 AM
:: Hello from the Critique Club ::
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Well, that's wacky alright.

For me the image is extremely harsh and looks very much like a snapshot. There are some simple changes I'd have made to prevent this:

> Don't use head-on flash - it flattens the shot and creates harsh shadows that 'outline' the subject
> Use a tripod and experiment with directional light sources to make it look warmer and more appetising, like a food 'pack shot' in advertising (just look at a magazine to see examples)
> Include more of the hand or none at all
> Try a lower angle to make the focus and composition more interesting

Cheers
Jon
 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/05/2004 08:28:17 AM
That green stuff will always be the death of me! HOT!
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10/02/2004 02:05:55 PM
too much people around... :)
10/02/2004 11:04:36 AM
I don't like gummy candies or sushi but very clever. Love the bursts of color.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/30/2004 08:58:44 PM
Maybeee the composition is a bit busy, but the idea is a good one. And it sure is wacky!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/30/2004 06:26:06 AM
Good food photo. Nice color use, great dof. Nice composition. Whacky fish.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/29/2004 11:44:28 PM
Nice concept.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/29/2004 05:06:41 PM
Great job your on your way up this is going to be in the top 10.
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09/29/2004 12:05:40 PM
Cute concept! Very colorful, nice wrist.
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09/29/2004 01:07:06 AM
yummy sussi
[10] for creativity
not sure if everyone will get this though
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