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The Porch
The Porch
dartompkins


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Parts (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 5700
Location: Oklahoma City
Date: Oct 1, 2004
Aperture: F3.8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1.87
Galleries: Sky, Seascapes
Date Uploaded: Oct 2, 2004

Partial view of the porch and the sunset.

Statistics
Place: 313 out of 436
Avg (all users): 4.6654
Avg (commenters): 5.7500
Avg (participants): 4.6265
Avg (non-participants): 4.7282
Views since voting: 887
Views during voting: 338
Votes: 269
Comments: 7
Favorites: 0


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10/13/2004 03:56:16 PM
From a technical standpoint, I see these flaws: contrast, lighting and cropping. Contrast and lighting are flawed in a similar way. The low light levels affects the overall contrast of this image. Like you mentioned yourself, it needs to be cropped to get rid of that white spot.

Aesthetically, it just doesn't pack a visual punch. I see the railing, the water, bits of the roof and the sunset but there isn't a main focal point that grabs my attention.

Hope that helps! By the way, I did not vote in this challenge.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/12/2004 09:00:58 PM
Great colors and composition. The placement of the lamp shade is perfect. Use caution when there is a shoreline in an image to make sure the water is level - your's is not.
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10/10/2004 04:07:44 AM
ok I see your image, but to me it is a landscape and a very good one.
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10/09/2004 11:37:09 PM
don't see it as part od something. Nice view though.
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10/09/2004 02:28:30 PM
There is something 'almost' about this picture. The composition is not quite right but I can't tell you what the problem is.
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10/08/2004 03:37:48 PM
this is a beautiful image with some beautiful colors. I think there may be too much going on in the image though. There seem to be three separate focal points, the lamp, the fence and the sunset. Any one of these could be really interesting as its own 'part.' I'd like to see one focused on the lamp with a blurry pink sunset background perhaps.
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10/06/2004 01:22:27 AM
nice lines, i wish the lamp was in better focus. 7
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