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10/19/2004 07:42:18 AM |
| I like the composition and focus a lot. Clear "communication" theme. |
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10/19/2004 06:44:20 AM |
| I would have liked to seethe text and the top of the pen in focus rather than the top of the pen. Nice idea though. |
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10/18/2004 01:10:44 AM |
| Would prefer if the "Dear Mom" were in the focal plane (rather than "BiC") |
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10/17/2004 05:01:58 AM |
| A good idea, I think I would prefer to see the focus on the writing though rather than the top of the pencil. |
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10/16/2004 09:29:32 PM |
| I like the idea, but I think it would have worked better focussed on the tip rather than the logo. Unless the intent was ironic, re: the communication in advertising in which case again - nice idea, but too subtle. |
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10/14/2004 10:58:05 PM |
| I don't like the disembodied pen look., but certainly this is a letter we should all be writing. |
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10/14/2004 05:01:57 PM |
| It's hard to do, but a greater depth of field would keep the words and paper in focus. Tyr using a smaller aperture (higher f number) which would probably mean a longer exposure, so a tripod is almost essential. |
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10/14/2004 12:17:08 PM |
Clever.
Out of focus a bit. |
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10/14/2004 11:26:47 AM |
| Great shot, just feel though that "dear mom" should have been within the DOF, that would have nailed the shot. |
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10/13/2004 01:56:05 PM |
| Your DOF is too much on the pencil and the paper is blurred. |
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