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10/29/2004 05:21:16 PM |
hope you don't mind, but i have some free time and thought i start making comments on randomly selected images...
i gave this a 6. i found it technically ok and on topic. what could make it better? two things come to mind. probably some more interesting verbiage that would grab the reader's attention, then make them wish for more once they got to the ink splotch. another would be shooting from a slightly lower angle that would show more of the page. the colors, lighting, and lines are nice. |
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10/23/2004 05:08:37 PM |
Yes i don`t miss those fountain pens :) |
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10/22/2004 12:59:47 AM |
bad at writing stories i can tell |
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10/21/2004 09:06:11 PM |
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10/21/2004 02:30:33 AM |
I like it. The blotted ink spill from the fountain pen when it gets clogged and then all of a sudden unclogged. Got to get some more paper for this story. |
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10/20/2004 06:32:21 PM |
I like the concept but the pic is a little too spartan |
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