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kirtiebu


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Challenge: School Days (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix S5000 Z
Location: Hervey Bay, Queensland.
Date: Oct 17, 2004
Galleries: Interior, Studio
Date Uploaded: Oct 17, 2004

 Slite crop, brightened.

Statistics
Place: 145 out of 195
Avg (all users): 4.5556
Avg (commenters): 4.6000
Avg (participants): 4.4316
Avg (non-participants): 4.6196
Views since voting: 815
Views during voting: 397
Votes: 279
Comments: 16
Favorites: 0

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10/26/2004 06:18:36 AM
The backround is very uniteresting so I would have gotten in closer, but that is just IMO. 6
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 10/25/2004 09:21:04 AM
The apple looks good, but the rest of the phot is washed out.
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 10/25/2004 03:20:42 AM
too white
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 10/23/2004 04:28:40 AM
My first reaction to this was predictable stereotype. But looking at the photo a little longer reveals a very good photograph with a strong composition.
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 10/22/2004 12:59:25 PM
This is okay, and I like the faded effect. It seems the red apple should have been either more or less colourful. It doesn't look quite colourful enough to be the main focus of my attention, but not quite faded enough to blend in with the rest of the photo. The same applies to the tips of the four pens/markers...my vote would be to make the colours more vibrant.
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 10/21/2004 04:16:56 PM
Like the high-key in this. Wish the apple were a little more "polished" I think the colored ends of the pens fight for attention and draw the eye away too much. Nice idea, though.
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 10/21/2004 03:09:45 PM
The lighting is a little harsh for my taste.
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 10/21/2004 10:36:36 AM
it is completely over-exposed.
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 10/21/2004 08:24:17 AM
A nice still life set up but I don't find that the extreme high key approach is the right mood for the theme. It looks like you knew what you were doing in terms of lighting so I won't suggest how you could tone it down but I think it needs it. The high key approach is nice for a slick, modern look but IMO warmer lighting is called for. If the apple had been resting on a lap top than this approach would have worked beautifully for me (although it still needs toning down a bit as the details in the apple and the colors just aren't popping like they should). Nice effort!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 10/21/2004 01:36:13 AM
Too bright for me
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 10/20/2004 11:22:41 PM
ah...... thank you
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 10/20/2004 04:54:25 PM
Looks overexposed
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 10/20/2004 04:42:45 PM
Very overexposed, very dull colors...I'm voting it low for those reasons...
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 10/20/2004 01:44:28 PM
Nice composition. Would like to see a sharper, brighter red apple.
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 10/20/2004 08:05:17 AM
Too bright
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 10/20/2004 02:21:35 AM
seems a little washed out to me
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