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08/31/2015 12:15:31 PM |
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*
A flawed cityscape that makes a mediocre contribution to the open challenge.
The first thing that hits me with your image is that it is tilted and it is tilted to an extent that is evident as a fault rather than a deliberate exaggerated enhancement. If you wanted to use the technique you would use a much more obvious slant that introduces a nother element to the image. The title is also ill-fitted unless we are to believe that all the water we see here is a result of phenomenally heavy rain fall!
The sky is not adding a lot to the image and would benefit from cropping but there are also artefacts throughout particularly noticeable around the buildings. I think more emphasis on the foreground as opposed to the sky would have been better. The reds prove what a dominant colour it is in this near monotones the reds are all very strong and vibrant, I am assuming you didn't saturate the reds specifically?
I think a little more attention to important detail would have helped you here, good luck with your future entries. Apologies for the late critique, but as they say, better late than never, Sid |
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12/07/2014 06:03:34 PM |
What!? Rain in Melbourne?! I've never heard such nonsense ;P
Nice colours... make me homesick, even if the weather shown isn't perfect. |
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12/07/2014 12:43:40 AM |
| Good detail and good looking tones. |
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12/05/2014 04:41:00 PM |
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