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02/09/2003 11:19:53 PM |
Critique Club:
MEeting the Challenge: I think you did an excellent job of this. I do not mind the distorted squares behind the windows a bit, in fact love the way they repeat the theme.
Composition: This is adequate. The light bushes at the bottom give me a sense of perspective and gives the shot a bit of added contrast and a feeling of stability. I think I would have cropped this up a bit differently, but due to some distortion it was a difficult shot to crop. I do like the arch reflected not being on center.
Technical Quality: As noted by others, the slant to the windows at the top bothers me a lot and seems to be a technical problem caused by the positioning of your camera. Maybe a slight lightening up would have also helped or a levels adjustment to lighten up your midtones.
Creativity: Excellent! I love this idea!!
Conclusion: Nice shot, needed some techical help, really liked the way you captured these cool distorted squares within the window squares.
If you have any questions, please feel free to write me!! |
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01/30/2003 03:33:44 PM |
Composition: Excellent
Technical: Only slight issue is the windows aren't parallel to the pic at the top. Little dark?
Meets challenge: Yes
Overall impression: Great idea/subject, but slightly lacking tech as above. 7 |
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01/29/2003 02:37:35 PM |
| Wow. This is a good image. I really enjoy how you captured this. You may have tried a better tone for this image , maybe sepia, to get a different look other than black and white. |
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01/29/2003 10:29:56 AM |
| i don't think tjis is a very creative image, but nice try |
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01/29/2003 09:44:38 AM |
| This is neat but just kinda dark. I'm not sure about the b/w choice here either. |
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01/28/2003 11:21:27 AM |
| Nice focus, I like the way you can see the distortion in the reflections. Think it has more impact without the bottom row of windows and the plants. |
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01/27/2003 06:01:40 AM |
| The squares are lost in reflection. |
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01/27/2003 12:37:42 AM |
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