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02/10/2015 02:53:26 PM |
| Overall nice mood. I would crop out the top 1/3, and definitely needs more depth. |
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01/20/2015 12:47:53 PM |
Originally posted by dtremain:
Look at just the top 1/2 of the picture, then just at the bottom 1/2 - do you see how much different the feel is between the two? And nothing really ties the two together. This leaves the viewer feeling dissonance and probably with a tendency to dislike the photo.
The bottom half has some great lighting and glow in the hanging moss. The top half not so much.
I really, really like the bottom 1/2 of the picture - you've got some good things going... |
I totally agree, needs to be cropped for sure. Thank you for the tip, very helpful! |
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01/16/2015 05:19:51 PM |
Look at just the top 1/2 of the picture, then just at the bottom 1/2 - do you see how much different the feel is between the two? And nothing really ties the two together. This leaves the viewer feeling dissonance and probably with a tendency to dislike the photo.
The bottom half has some great lighting and glow in the hanging moss. The top half not so much.
I really, really like the bottom 1/2 of the picture - you've got some good things going... |
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01/15/2015 11:33:38 AM |
Originally posted by Mike:
Originally posted by monster-zero:
I'm far from being someone to critique anyone else's work, but maybe a different aperture setting would have worked better here. Something like f/8 to get everything more in focus and sharper. I love the overall feeling and mood of this photo. Keep up the good work |
i agree, you may have gotten more of a "star" in the flare with the lens closed down too. |
Yea, I realize now I should have had my aperture to about f16, would have sharpened, and made that light give the star flare as you said... Im going to go back and try again...Thanks for the critiques yall! :) |
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01/15/2015 11:30:42 AM |
Originally posted by monster-zero:
I'm far from being someone to critique anyone else's work, but maybe a different aperture setting would have worked better here. Something like f/8 to get everything more in focus and sharper. I love the overall feeling and mood of this photo. Keep up the good work |
i agree, you may have gotten more of a "star" in the flare with the lens closed down too. |
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01/15/2015 10:45:13 AM |
| I'm far from being someone to critique anyone else's work, but maybe a different aperture setting would have worked better here. Something like f/8 to get everything more in focus and sharper. I love the overall feeling and mood of this photo. Keep up the good work |
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