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10/24/2004 08:51:51 AM |
| I like your shot - interesting rotation, good focus, nice negative space - but the Epson paper is completely distracting. |
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10/23/2004 04:23:51 PM |
| Innovative, maybe even better if the recorder had been 'holes up' too. Gowever I really like this, one of my top ten. |
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10/23/2004 05:11:44 AM |
It is an interesting take, on a common image. And rotating the image in this way will probably get some interesting feedback.
I feel that if you had placed the recorder across the picture you would have achieved a more dynamic impact.
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10/22/2004 01:59:20 PM |
| EPSON EPSON EPSON....Is it intended? Interesting angle, but personally I find it uneasy to look at. Great focus and DOF. |
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10/22/2004 01:38:34 PM |
| A neat idea/vantage point... although I would have tried to use something completely white on the right side so the "Epson" mark doesn't show up like that. Perhaps a different crop could have eliminated that. |
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10/22/2004 12:56:47 PM |
| I llike your choice of subject. However, I find the rotation odd, it just doesn't feel right to me. Also the watermark on the backgound paper (epson) draws undue attention--even without the words I think it would be better with less of that 1/4 of the picture showing. |
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10/22/2004 10:54:55 AM |
| Not a bad idea... I think the picture might have been better rotated to the original - this leaves my eyes falling down and to the right... |
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10/22/2004 02:30:01 AM |
| i almost didnt notice the epson photo paper in the background...but then i did. it really takes away here. some more lighting would also help. other than that it is a nice image, good focus |
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10/21/2004 09:47:52 PM |
| interesting photo....like the rotation...dont like the epson photo paper...really nice otherwise. |
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10/21/2004 05:29:23 PM |
| NOOOO make them stop!!! The recorder has to be the worst instrument ever. Good take on school. The epson paper is annoying however. |
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10/21/2004 12:32:01 PM |
| Your idea with turning makes it more interesting. Still would like there would be more lights and shades... also backround preferably without titles. |
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10/21/2004 01:47:39 AM |
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10/20/2004 10:15:35 PM |
| Great depth of field, but the epson paper really detracts from the shot! |
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10/20/2004 07:44:16 PM |
| Your choice of view point is interesting. I'm not sure that I like it... then again I'm not sure that I don't either. In any event, I spent more time looking at this than most so I'm giving this a 6 |
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10/20/2004 07:01:09 PM |
| Wow! Cool angle. I love the sense of depth. Good DOF too. My only problem is the epson background stuff, something else there and this would be one of my high picks. |
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10/20/2004 06:27:52 PM |
| the Epson paper on the right side detracts - also creates negative space making the phot feel unfinished - should it have been rotated 90 deg counter? |
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10/20/2004 05:01:49 PM |
| Nice angle, shame about the epson background......nevemind Dad...try again next time......(5) |
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10/20/2004 04:39:08 PM |
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10/20/2004 04:30:50 PM |
| The perspective is intriguing and captures my interest, though I think I might prefer a 90 CCW rotate with the mouthpiece right there inviting me to practice. I'm afraid I missed the Epson connection and feel that that entire portion detracts from the image. I'd prefer it if the recorder wasn't flush against the edge of the sheet music, which would enacle you to use a black background. I think that would work better as would a tighter crop on that portion on the image. 5, just-married |
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10/20/2004 03:43:32 PM |
| I like this photo as music is such an important part of education. The colors are great, use of dof, rotation, and image crop are technically well executed. BUT, why the Epson paper as the background ? I think this may not place as well due to the background. |
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10/20/2004 02:51:54 PM |
| EPSON watermarks in the background. Should have used a different paper. Learning is definitly a subject here. I keep tilting my head to stop the flute from falling off the book. |
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10/20/2004 10:46:39 AM |
| Great idea. The "Epson" writing on the right is distracting. |
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10/20/2004 10:23:43 AM |
| Turn the picture 90 deg. counter clockwise and this picture would be much more intriguing. |
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10/20/2004 09:47:33 AM |
| Great depth and focus, but why the Epson paper for the background? |
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10/20/2004 03:29:19 AM |
| Uh, horisontal composition makes this image wild! |
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10/20/2004 01:04:41 AM |
| A strange and somewhat disconcerting angle. |
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10/20/2004 12:57:26 AM |
| if it wasn't for the background saying epson this would've been a really nice photo! good luck any way |
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10/20/2004 12:24:21 AM |
| This could have worked if your background didn't say Epson . . Epson . . Epson. It is a good idea with poor execution. I would suggest turning this shot portrait rather than landscape. The focus is a bit soft on the tip which is the focal point. Your focus seems to be clearest on the first ridge instead. Keep trying. |
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