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08/13/2015 01:02:07 PM |
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*
An interesting shot in difficult lighting.
I like the intimate moment you have captured that conveys a lovely warm and inviting atmosphere where the people are all enjoying themselves. I'm not sure if the people in the background add that much but they are sufficiently out of focus for it not to be an issue.
Although the exposure is generally dark I think you have done the right thing to anonymise the couple through silhouettes but capture the bright colours of the lighting. Your composition is generally good in terms of the lighting itself but it has made the couple a little too central for my liking. Perhaps if the radiating light in the background had been moved a little higher and further right it might have improved the overall composition. The light pattern on the floor is essential and works well. Your focus on the couple is good too.
I like your image and feel that it was undervalued here, anyway, good luck with your future entries, Sid. |
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02/07/2015 02:55:17 PM |
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02/01/2015 09:25:31 PM |
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