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An apple for teacher...
An apple for teacher...
jmlelii


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Challenge: School Days (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Canon EOS-300D Rebel
Location: my house
Date: Oct 19, 2004
Date Uploaded: Oct 19, 2004

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Place: 113 out of 195
Avg (all users): 4.8648
Avg (commenters): 5.3333
Avg (participants): 4.6737
Avg (non-participants): 4.9624
Views since voting: 752
Views during voting: 396
Votes: 281
Comments: 15
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10/26/2004 10:50:02 PM
This is a wonderful capture. Some may not like the lighting but I think it adds to the photo. Only shadow I think distracts is the one on the wall. Good job. BTW - she does not look all that excited about giving the teacher the apple! LOL
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10/26/2004 08:23:17 PM
I could be wrong but I think if the light was coming from a different direction than below it wouldn't have such a creepy feeling. But if thats what you are going for then good job...
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10/26/2004 08:03:55 PM
well, don't look so happy about it. Great lighting!
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10/26/2004 01:50:18 PM
I like the way you have the light coming up to the subject.
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10/26/2004 05:33:17 AM
it would really help if there was even just a hint of a smile on her face, alternatively the look would go well with her handing over a number of papers implying that she had done her lines (or similar)
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10/25/2004 03:07:37 AM
the lighting makes this just a little creepy...
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10/23/2004 03:02:14 PM
You surely don't look very happy to be giving that teacher an apple...actually it looks like you're getting ready to hit her in the back of the head with it.
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10/23/2004 07:33:36 AM
I like the mono tones. I'm sorry, but I'm not so sure about the pose and the lighting. 3
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10/23/2004 06:51:17 AM
Cool lighting. I can't quite tell if the apple is about to be tossed at the teacher, or if it is just the pose.
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10/21/2004 07:48:58 PM
Good composition and lighting of the apple. However, your subject's expression is lacking and the apple is posed as if she may fling it.
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10/21/2004 01:14:09 PM
color i realy think this would have looked better in color. dark red apple smooth background. I think i could realy like this shot.
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10/21/2004 08:22:06 AM
Nice detail, to make it better, use a gray card and reflect the light into the face to bring just a bit more of the left eye out.
It will keep the effect you are after, just make it better.
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10/20/2004 04:38:40 PM
The composition is nice, but I don't care for your choice of lighting direction or strength - it's a little dramatic. That is unless this is a poison apple....
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10/20/2004 04:35:13 PM
This picture looks psychotic. 5
10/20/2004 04:31:52 PM
is it poisoned? the girl looks as if it could well be...
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