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10/26/2004 10:50:02 PM |
| This is a wonderful capture. Some may not like the lighting but I think it adds to the photo. Only shadow I think distracts is the one on the wall. Good job. BTW - she does not look all that excited about giving the teacher the apple! LOL |
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10/26/2004 08:23:17 PM |
| I could be wrong but I think if the light was coming from a different direction than below it wouldn't have such a creepy feeling. But if thats what you are going for then good job... |
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10/26/2004 08:03:55 PM |
| well, don't look so happy about it. Great lighting! |
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10/26/2004 01:50:18 PM |
| I like the way you have the light coming up to the subject. |
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10/26/2004 05:33:17 AM |
| it would really help if there was even just a hint of a smile on her face, alternatively the look would go well with her handing over a number of papers implying that she had done her lines (or similar) |
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10/25/2004 03:07:37 AM |
| the lighting makes this just a little creepy... |
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10/23/2004 03:02:14 PM |
| You surely don't look very happy to be giving that teacher an apple...actually it looks like you're getting ready to hit her in the back of the head with it. |
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10/23/2004 07:33:36 AM |
| I like the mono tones. I'm sorry, but I'm not so sure about the pose and the lighting. 3 |
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10/23/2004 06:51:17 AM |
| Cool lighting. I can't quite tell if the apple is about to be tossed at the teacher, or if it is just the pose. |
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10/21/2004 07:48:58 PM |
| Good composition and lighting of the apple. However, your subject's expression is lacking and the apple is posed as if she may fling it. |
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10/21/2004 01:14:09 PM |
| color i realy think this would have looked better in color. dark red apple smooth background. I think i could realy like this shot. |
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10/21/2004 08:22:06 AM |
Nice detail, to make it better, use a gray card and reflect the light into the face to bring just a bit more of the left eye out.
It will keep the effect you are after, just make it better. |
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10/20/2004 04:38:40 PM |
| The composition is nice, but I don't care for your choice of lighting direction or strength - it's a little dramatic. That is unless this is a poison apple.... |
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10/20/2004 04:35:13 PM |
| This picture looks psychotic. 5 |
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10/20/2004 04:31:52 PM |
| is it poisoned? the girl looks as if it could well be... |
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