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08/03/2015 06:32:40 AM |
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*
A colourful image that meets the challenge well.
Your viewpoint makes for an interesting contrast between the dark mysterious interior and the boldly coloured exterior forming a frame for the entire scene. The mystery is added to with the position of the napkins obscuring the mans face and the dim lighting that reluctantly reveals the ladies somewhat pensive face. The man's position within the space feels very dynamic, I especially like her position in the top corner.
The lighting is flat and the exposure is good creating a dimly lit interior that suits the subject well. It has been well appreciated here with a respectable score together with some very useful comments, I concur particularly with the comment from streetpigeon.
Thank you for an interesting submission, Sid |
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03/15/2015 11:56:11 PM |
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03/15/2015 10:28:12 PM |
| very colourful. nice blockhead. |
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03/15/2015 08:34:43 PM |
| Great colors here. I like the composition too and that it tells a story. |
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03/14/2015 08:28:21 AM |
| I absolutely love the colors. But it feels a little too tightly cropped at the sides, and I might have straightened the horizontal at the top or bottom of the window instead of using the shelf as it would have anchored at least one of the lines where this feels crooked everywhere. 7 as is. |
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03/11/2015 11:40:24 AM |
| Much more than bright colors, though these are fun, there's a lot of human story going on here, much of it implied, left to the imagination. What to make of the man with his tattooed arms, serving a platter to an empty counter, a large knife, undoubtedly a tool of the trade, resting ominously in front of him, and the anonymity of a cheese head? What is the woman's emotional state? What's she holding in her hand? Do they have enough ketchup? It's all very enjoyable. |
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