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07/17/2015 01:56:36 PM |
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*
First impressions are of an appealing subject reasonably well captured that I hope fits the challenge.
As a keen cycling enthusiast I am always attracted to bikes particularly action shots. Your panning action has captured the cyclist nice and sharp and introduced a little motion into the background. This is where the problem lies for me, because of the high shutter speed there is not enough motion blur in the background it looks more like camera shake, thereby significantly reducing the appeal of the shot.
The other big problem is that you have a dark clothed rider caught in the dark shadow of a tree and with the shadow unfortunately falling right across his face, probably the most important part of the image, the part where we can identify with the moment he is experiencing through his facial expression. Also the composition, I'm not sure why you feel the portrait orientation works better than landscape but I am all for a non-standard approach as long as it works. Because of the size of the rider and the amount of space he has left to ride into it probably just about works.
'I hope it fits the challenge', I am unable to judge this as I don't know what Ubique's philosophy is but I do like his comment, perhaps I am missing an important clue to that in his comment? I have followed the challenge description which has a link to a forum thread where I was hoping to learn more about his philosophy and try to work out whether this does fit the challenge, with 3760 comments to review I'm afraid life is just far too short, sorry. |
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04/12/2015 11:43:12 PM |
| this is so awesome on a high contrast monitor, it's like the bike dude is skewered by a spike, that emerges from his head as smoke. |
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04/12/2015 11:08:18 PM |
| Clever. Through a wood he rode, all he could see was what his camera told. Nice one. |
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04/12/2015 10:16:45 PM |
| Love how the figure is flattened on to the scene. |
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04/12/2015 06:53:16 PM |
| Thanks for the smile ΓΆ€“ great title |
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04/11/2015 02:12:07 PM |
| Negative lightning strike. |
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04/11/2015 10:57:33 AM |
| What comes to mind here is "looking for Sasquatch". The rider looks out of place and lost as there is no visible trail. Nice flux between light and shadow. |
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04/08/2015 01:58:27 PM |
| Great title. Nice shot of the "wild animal" through the bushes. |
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04/08/2015 06:12:38 AM |
| Great height you have here, like a mountain for the bike. The timing to bring the bike and shadow together brings a lot. |
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04/07/2015 11:33:20 PM |
| Ha! Best title so far. Love the long reaching shadows. |
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04/06/2015 08:41:46 AM |
| Clever. I always wondered how to pronounce it. And now I know. Thank you. Alternatively, gratias tibi ago. |
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