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11/01/2004 03:35:23 PM |
Thanks for all your comments. Yeh this was not too good - the top and bottom of the picutre should have been parallel but when I snapped it I was not even thinking about implied lines, if i had then i might have been a bit more careful!
Thanks Kavey for making it one of your favs - it means a lot to me when someone picks one of my photos!
:-)
Message edited by author 2004-11-01 15:36:13. |
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10/31/2004 06:10:32 PM |
| I like the general idea, would have been better if it was less noisey and if the side of the first frame was vertical. |
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10/31/2004 05:51:17 PM |
| I would either remove the noise completely or make it more obvious and pretend that it's film grain. Also would probably make this a horizontal shot. |
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10/29/2004 03:00:35 AM |
| it feels like it needs to be rotated slightly |
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10/28/2004 07:50:45 PM |
| Composition has a really strong impact for me. I love the very strong diagonals, the way the wonderfully even and repetitive 'line' of the images diverges to the invisible convergence point just as the real lines do. Black and white is perfect for this shot. |
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10/27/2004 03:01:54 PM |
| good perspective shot - the edge of the left photo not being parallel to the edge of the pic is a little distracting as is the part of the ceiling that shows up |
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10/27/2004 01:51:42 PM |
| Nice B&W... good focus and compozition just pitty its quite grainy. |
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10/27/2004 05:22:44 AM |
| hmmm, it certainly fits the challenge. I like the look of this shot, and the graininess too. Though I wonder if this might be one of the few justifiable cases for selective desaturation? also, i think a landscaped orientaiton (with less ceiling and floor visible) might have helped drawing your eye along the picutres thereby emphasising the implied lines. It's a good arty concept though. 6. |
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10/25/2004 11:43:45 AM |
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