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02/06/2003 10:47:39 PM |
...from Critique Club...
Hi Erik :)
FIRST IMPRESSION:
Greatest invention ever!
COMPOSITION:
Pretty straight forward, but for this challenge I would try to get more of a 'square' feeling to it....maybe just rolling the paper up a bit. :|
TECHNICAL:
Nice soft focus that works for me. lighting is a tad dark, IMO. :|
ARTISTIC:
Very creative. The black and white treatment works nicely. Still not too sure about the square thing :)
OVERALL:
Nice shot, worthy of the final score.
Cheers and good luck in the future challenges. |
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02/02/2003 09:19:52 PM |
| good crop, could've done without the border, the tiles make for a nice irregular border at the photo's edge. |
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02/02/2003 04:58:30 PM |
| great shot... i really love the concept on this one :) It reminds me slightly of a shot that I have done in the past... I commend you for working with a subject that stirs negative emotion. I don't think I have ever really studied the shape and composition of this scene before.. = 9 - setzler |
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02/01/2003 01:09:31 PM |
| I LOVE IT!! I especially like the tear of the paper. Feels strange to give toilet paper a score of 8. |
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02/01/2003 12:10:42 AM |
| Hahaha Good one! I love it. |
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01/31/2003 03:50:03 PM |
| Great sense of humor. Probably more effective, though, if we could see the perforations that make the squares. |
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01/31/2003 12:24:06 PM |
Composition: Good
Technical: Nice choice of b&w. Border fits in very well with the black in the pic
Meets challenge: Yes
Overall impression: Pretty faultless. 8 |
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01/31/2003 11:35:36 AM |
| All around this seems a little off (pardon the pun). It just doesn't seem square. The paper could be more square than you left it actually. Top of the paper looks like it might be a little washed out. - Inspzil |
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01/30/2003 01:16:39 AM |
| I like this picture. Nice idea. |
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01/29/2003 08:20:52 PM |
| Not a square to spare LOL!! I would give this a higher mark if I could make out the perforation line in the toilet paper. The photo is a bit crooked. |
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01/29/2003 08:07:17 PM |
| I like the creativity, but I don't really understand about why the paper is ripped like it is. I'm not sure, if the toilet paper is supposed to be apart of the 'squares' or not. |
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01/28/2003 10:43:27 PM |
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01/27/2003 07:22:39 PM |
| You're on a roll now!! Nice shot! Cub |
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01/27/2003 12:09:35 AM |
| Very creative, I never thought of that. |
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