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08/05/2015 06:05:49 AM |
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*
A competent image that only partially meets the challenge
Your image is technically sound with sufficient DOF and no camera shake and you have thought about including sufficient detail to identify the truck and its speciality of duck and the human element of a lady purchasing food, so to that end it has everything needed. What it does not do is to convey in me a feeling that this is specifically summer food, I could of course be wrong but duck is eaten all year round and it could just as easily be seen there in the middle of winter. I think for the challenge there needs to be more of an emphasis on that which identifies it as being summer related.
From your shooting position you have cropped it as much as you can but I think a shallower DOF would have isolated the distracting background detail more and you have plenty of scope for that with your fast lens. I have to say that there is not really much to make the viewer linger here for very long it might have been better if we saw the dish she is waiting for but in terms of the challenge it doesn't quite make the mark.
Thanks for your submission, Sid |
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07/30/2015 09:33:30 AM |
| The lady looks like she's (as we say where I'm from) lus for something lekker! |
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