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Before the fall...
Before the fall...
RyanW


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Challenge: Free Study 2015-07 (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Nikon D7000
Lens: Nikon AF Zoom-Nikkor 70-300mm f/4.0-5.6G
Location: Mayo, QC
Date: Jul 10, 2015
Aperture: 6.3
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/250
Date Uploaded: Jul 31, 2015

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one of a series of images as my son was splashing around and subsequently falling in the lake

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Place: 93 out of 146
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Votes: 82
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08/08/2015 07:31:35 AM
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*

A great shot for the family album.

A moment stopping action shot which together with your title suggests the brief calm before the subsequent splash and possible tears. I like that it is a candid moment where your son is completely oblivious to the camera.

I like the composition with your son positioned on the front third with plenty of background water and trees to convey where he is. I have to agree with posthumous I would definitely get rid of the frame edges, for me, its ruining the end result. The other big problem is the blown highlight on his arm it definitely needs pegging back some.

All in all a very pleasing shot that with the suggested alterations would be even stronger, thanks, Sid
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08/06/2015 11:15:02 AM
great capture, but the vignette and coloring create a kind of sickly pall
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08/02/2015 08:33:34 PM
Adorable!
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