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09/08/2015 07:23:09 AM |
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*
An action shot that contributes well to the open challenge.
Well captured Marcel, a very dynamic image that freezes the action mid stroke. I particularly like his shadows, there are some bold colours throughout. You've got good sharp focus on the player himself and the determined effort he is making with a nice shallow DOF separating him from the background.
Your composition is good with him on the left of the frame powering into the empty right. What would give the shot more impact would be to have the speeding ball in the right of the frame. Timing wise again the shot would have more impact if the racket didn't coincide with the apparatus in the background.
Generally, a good shot Marcel, well done, Sid |
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09/07/2015 09:13:18 PM |
does he have something weird in his back pocket? |
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09/04/2015 01:19:37 PM |
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