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08/19/2015 06:30:52 AM |
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*
An image that fits the challenge in an obvious sort of way.
I like that you have chosen to concentrate on a viewpoint that makes it immediately obvious what we are looking at but it just doesn't seem a very inspiring sort of image. As one of your commenters has pointed out the focus is on the second wheel throwing the lead one into soft focus which somewhat spoils the effect.
I think the repetition of the wheels would have been enhanced by cropping the front one so that we don't know its the first one but we have the illusion of a never-ending line of trolleys that just goes on ad infinitum. I like the diagonal of the composition but what I think would have also improved it would have been to go in close on the wheels looking up towards the rest of the trolley structure, this may have made it more interesting and engaging. The debris on the floor doesn't add to the shot and would have been better cleaned up either before or after the shot.
A good attempt Janine but not one of your best, Sid |
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08/15/2015 03:51:59 PM |
| Nice. I like the repeated pattern. Wish the lead wheel were a bit sharper. Looks like focal point is really on the second wheel. |
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