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02/09/2003 09:21:25 PM |
Hello from the Critique Club!
Composition:
I really like the composition in this shot! I like the fact that the candle is inside a square panel, perspective wise. What I don't like is that you can see the walls on the sides of the door frames, which are a bit distracting to the eye. Without those I think it would be better.
Background:
As I stated a bit earlier, I think the door frames are a bit distracting with the bright walls. the Squares which are in the background are pretty good, and fit the challenge. You got a bit of artifacting in the window pane right behind the candle, which is also a bit distracting.
I think this fits the challenge very well, and that your score is a decent one and reflects that most did as well. I think you over exposed the flame of the candle a bit, which is hard to deal with for any photographer. Well done, I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future! |
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02/02/2003 09:02:02 AM |
| Good idea, Great photo. Very well taken indeed. The simplicity is good, not too simple. Seems to be a problem this week, oversimplifying - Inspzil |
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02/02/2003 08:03:23 AM |
| Nice angle + I like the star burst. Jacko. |
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01/30/2003 03:19:16 PM |
Composition: Good
Technical: Not too keen on the fairly bright r-hand wall. Unbalances pic slightly? Mirror frame looks jagged too? :-/
Meets challenge: Yes
Overall impression: Good idea/pic let down slightly by lighting. 6 |
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01/29/2003 02:16:14 PM |
| Interesting lighting. There is just enough darkness in the image to give it the right look. What is the object sitting in the square? Good work. |
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01/29/2003 11:30:31 AM |
| the angle and use of candle light makes this a very pleasing shot..well focused and meets the challenge beautifully.(9) |
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01/29/2003 10:49:14 AM |
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01/28/2003 02:37:02 PM |
| Good picture, i think the candle really contrasts the pitch black of the sky. |
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01/28/2003 02:28:48 AM |
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01/27/2003 11:27:09 PM |
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01/27/2003 07:32:40 PM |
| Wow!! Nice shot. I love the composition and the lighting!! Cub |
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