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02/12/2003 09:22:06 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
This would easily fit into either of this weeks two challenges.
The repititous pattern is very interesting and appealing.
I like the way the light and shadows contrast, emphasizing the design. The colors are not real bright, but that's fine. Subtlity is nice too.
Perhaps the crop is a little tight. A little space between the bows and the edge of the picture would be better, I think.
Over all a nice picture.
Regards,
Grayce |
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02/09/2003 11:55:23 PM |
I liked the repeating pattern. Maybe you could have repeated the covers as well or eliminated them? The soft focus distracted me. Keep up the good work. |
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02/07/2003 03:24:01 PM |
looks out of focus and the color is dull. |
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02/06/2003 10:06:47 PM |
I'm not sure how this qualifies as a "cliche," though the pattern is nice. |
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02/06/2003 02:27:01 PM |
need to get the front of all the boats--I think that angle would have a more dramatic effect |
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02/06/2003 09:44:14 AM |
I love the pattern here - personally I would have liked for the sharpest focus to be at the beginning of the boats - (these comments are so subjective) - its a great shot either way!! |
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02/06/2003 12:29:33 AM |
This shot isn't very interesing and it seems to be out of focus. Nothing really to focus my eye on. |
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02/05/2003 06:28:23 PM |
Nice use of patturns and colors. This is a very unique photograph. Good job. |
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02/05/2003 06:02:56 PM |
Im not sure exactly what the picture is of but i like the color and how clear the picture came out. Nice Work |
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02/04/2003 10:03:55 PM |
Took some looking to figure this one out. This is different and nice. In fact each time I look at it the roofs appear to look different, looking life water, then like a roof, then like etc. Hope you can see what I mean. This is unique and I like it. Great initiative on your part and a well done photo. |
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02/04/2003 07:15:57 PM |
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02/04/2003 02:20:40 PM |
Certainly meets the challenge...have seen this shot many times in photo books. |
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02/04/2003 12:57:22 PM |
Nice composition, but I wish the focus was sharper. |
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02/03/2003 11:33:55 PM |
Visual impact doesn't say much to me, perhaps if you had showed more photo to me? The overall color is okay, but only 3 of the boats are in focus. The colors do stand out bright enough, but is that enough? |
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02/03/2003 10:14:32 PM |
I would have like a little more of a cleaner photo. It seems sort of blurry or grainy to me. |
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02/03/2003 02:45:22 PM |
nice composition. the zig-zag line work in the boats move the eye nicely through the photo! |
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02/03/2003 02:22:39 PM |
Composition: Excellent choice of shape. The number of boats you have included seems to confuse the picture. I think I might prefer it slightly more open (not quite sure how).
Technical: Colours and lack of border are good. I guess the shot was hand-held making deep DOF difficult, but I think crisper focus would have benefited the end result.
Meets challenge: Holiday photo?
Overall impression: Good idea but let down slightly by aesthetics for me personally. 6 |
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