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11/15/2004 09:00:46 PM |
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11/13/2004 10:15:26 AM |
| I think I would like to see this in color but very cool shot otherwise... |
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11/10/2004 07:37:15 PM |
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11/10/2004 04:54:14 PM |
| Because of you DOF, theres a ring in the photo that's actually in focus, the center is blurred, the edges are blurred, but theres a ring of focus areound the foreground and background (because you're shooting a sphere). This hurts the composition and weakens the focal point - do I look at the scuff thats blurred or the stitching that's mostly in focus? I would say, lenghthen your DOF to solve this problem. I like the composition otherwise and the b/w |
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11/10/2004 08:58:59 AM |
| Good DoF use here, but the composition is a bit off in my opinion. I would have brought the stiches towards the middle a bit so they werent so close to the edge of the frame. Also, there is too much negative space on the left. Try boosting contrast in post processing too, to increase the immediate impact of the shot. |
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